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drifting

drifting
into consciousness
the Sleeper awakens,
the light of awareness
rises
like a newborn sun
nebulae of thoughts
coalesce into an ocean that brims its depth with life,
and the sea of knowledge must rise to touch
the finger pointing
giving birth to all things proud, to all things
humble;

kneeling orchids bloom a jealous moon fading,
and the deserts sand with bones and beach
tall grasses grow like clouds
seeding earth with poems and wings

Love is a perfect diatom
letting all things be
inside the sky that crushes me
to my beggar's bowl,
and the Dreamer lives
encased inside a hollow shell,
here am I
and here I must remain.


— Kailashana, Jul 06, 2010

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

Pregnant with wisdom

Ann of Norway Pregnant with wisdom your words fill the empty vessel of my mind with such enlightened thoughts that I feel different, transformed into ocean and sky, part of the elements personified and made visible by your beautiful words, thank you Anna, you and Barry, this love is so wonderful it spills into the essence of you and in so doing brims over and refreshes us in the process. Love Ann.
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Orphani

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks for reading Ann, even

Thanks for reading Ann, even if I am persona non grata it seems. But then again, I've always been a fashionable derelict. Love. Makes all things new. ~A
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Very Beautifully Written

This is so beautiful. I loved reading your wonderful poem. It is very beautifully written. Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

Ah i am drifting up with delight!

i have a dream to, i dream that one day i will write something so stunning as this Anna, "Kneeling Orchids bloom" just wonderful much love shirley harrison
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Mari Shine

15 years 11 months ago

Wow! What a superbly penned

Wow! What a superbly penned poem Anna, a true delight to read. Wonderful pictorial grandeur and fine words of wisdom in each line, which Confucius himself would be proud of! So well expressed and with a satin smooth flow. A pleasure to read and I have enjoyed reading so much. Thank You for sharing Anna. Blessings....