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the Great Lie

 

They carefully and impersonally raped my soul,

uttered the Great Lie, stripped my heart from its breast.

Unenlightened, instinctively playing the role cast on their star’s blueprint,

mechanically, unaware they were messengers from the profound,

they told the equivocation with such conviction as to bury Knowledge.

 

I sank into an aberration of sightless oblivion.

In sticky, viscous darkness I heard bloodcurdling denial in jabberwocky burble,

felt the filmy fingers of transparent veils that hide the chaos of what is not really there

behind the abomination of the masked masquerade of things manifest.

 

I thought I would stay forever tasting the appalling aroma

and smelling the fetid fear of the black nothingness of not knowing.

 

 

Then one morning I woke to harmonic birds’ chorus,

variegated gliding through a cloudless sun birth.

A joyous dawn rousing to dance and symphony

and in the new day’s air I sensed first light.

 

So I sat in stillness, to seek or escape, and felt golden warmth white-wax my soul.

A twilight journey, a tunnel travelled

and I touched Truth

 

as he casually strolled into the cosmos of my psyche

mocking the Great Lie, proving to me

we are forever somewhere in the timelessness of now.

 

 

 

— judyanne, Jul 05, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

Judy

i will give another 100 stars to you! now just to say i felt like that when i was told santa does not exist! very special poem my dear Judy! with much love always see 1 step behind!!!!!!! shirley harrison
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

WHAT??????

SANTA????? DOESN'T EXIST????? what you talkin' 'bout shirley harrison? lol judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Judy

A great message for believer and non believer alike. I have been reading your book and really getting into it. I would recommend it to anyone. My favorite lines: as he casually strolled into the cosmos of my psyche mocking the Great Lie, proving to me we are forever somewhere in the timelessness of now. These lines really resonated with me. Love, Cat
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

thank you cat

for your beautiful words so glad you are enjoying my book love to you judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Judd

Its all been said before me wonderful write huni ... cant find anything to add love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

thanks jc

love and hugs back judd xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

WOW judyanne, you've been and gone and done it here:-

Ann of Norway WOW judyanne, you've been and gone and done it here:- What wondrous words so devilishly stirred in the cauldron of knowledge and through their sorcery you rise out from it renewed despite their talons and tentacles, wonderful stuff this is well written and exciting to read too. love from annanya. "felt the filmy fingers of transparent veils that hide the chaos of what is not really there behind the abomination of the masked masquerade of things manifest." OOOOO!!! spooky.  
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

dear annanya

what a beautiful comment. thank you so much love and hugs judyanne xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Professor Purple

Professor Purple

15 years 11 months ago

A gripping poem,

I was relieved by the ending, things were so dark and bleak before Truth got in the picture! It's very interesting that it's a he, I would make Truth a she but I have no logical argument, I just feel that way. The personifications are excellent (Great Lie, Knowledge, Truth). I can't choose a favourite part, there are so many great images. Antoine
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

in this case the Truth was a 'he' antoine

leastways the messenger of it was thanks so much for reading and commenting love to you judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Rett

Rett

15 years 11 months ago

Judy, I only have one word...

Marvelous! Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

thanks so much rett

for visiting and the supportive comment love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html