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the Great Lie
They carefully and impersonally raped my soul,
uttered the Great Lie, stripped my heart from its breast.
Unenlightened, instinctively playing the role cast on their star’s blueprint,
mechanically, unaware they were messengers from the profound,
they told the equivocation with such conviction as to bury Knowledge.
I sank into an aberration of sightless oblivion.
In sticky, viscous darkness I heard bloodcurdling denial in jabberwocky burble,
felt the filmy fingers of transparent veils that hide the chaos of what is not really there
behind the abomination of the masked masquerade of things manifest.
I thought I would stay forever tasting the appalling aroma
and smelling the fetid fear of the black nothingness of not knowing.
Then one morning I woke to harmonic birds’ chorus,
variegated gliding through a cloudless sun birth.
A joyous dawn rousing to dance and symphony
and in the new day’s air I sensed first light.
So I sat in stillness, to seek or escape, and felt golden warmth white-wax my soul.
A twilight journey, a tunnel travelled
and I touched Truth
as he casually strolled into the cosmos of my psyche
mocking the Great Lie, proving to me
we are forever somewhere in the timelessness of now.
Critiques
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Judy
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
WHAT??????
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thank you cat
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thanks jc
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
WOW judyanne, you've been and gone and done it here:-
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
dear annanya
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
A gripping poem,
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
in this case the Truth was a 'he' antoine
Rett
15 years 11 months ago
Judy, I only have one word...
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
thanks so much rett