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Jul 05, 2010
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Peanut Butter
She has eyes, dark like Blackberries
A complexion like Cream
Lips like Wild Cherries
She smells like Fresh Nectarines
With all of this Fruit to choose from
What I really want
Is to rub Peanut Butter all over her Peaches
If you know what I mean :)
— hobo, Jul 05, 2010
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hobo
16 years ago
I'm off again
lou
16 years ago
Randy
shirley harrison
16 years ago
L:O:L you mean boobies!
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Randy
magics02
16 years ago
Okay Hobo
Kailashana
16 years ago
No, ‘splain to me
judyanne
16 years ago
why would you want to make her cheeks brown randy?
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Judy
judyanne
16 years ago
oops - sorry shirl
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Judy
judyanne
16 years ago
randy's boobies are in a class of their own?
Professor Purple
16 years ago
Lol
judyanne
16 years ago
love the new avatar antoine
shirley harrison
16 years ago
or is it an actual cow?
scribbler
16 years ago
peaches
lou
16 years ago
Randy
loved
16 years ago
love it
mona
16 years ago
Dear Hobo
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Randy
xena465
16 years ago
Hurry home Hobo
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