lou

Jul 05, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Angel and the Devil in me

Love has filled the aching chasm
that once was my heart
you touch me in infinite ways

You inspire the angel
and the devil in me
I’m in a delicious spin

I want to rip off your clothes
and delve within
and coat my self in you

Contentment resides deep inside
a fusion of fantasy and reality
stirs within

I feel I have loved in a former life
and that we will meet eternally
Interwoven within each other’s destiny

— lou, Jul 05, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

Critiques

shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

wow Lou!

excellent i hope it comes true for all if its meant to be it will be! fantastic yummy poetry! much love shirl... shirley harrison

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Shirley

Thanks Shirl me dear !!!!! much love lou xx

Dennis Go

15 years 11 months ago

Simply filled with love and passion! Great! (on the third line, it should either be "you touch me in infinite ways" or "you touch me in an infinite way", nothing much, just the subject-verb agreement thing) Dennis

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Dennis

Thank you xx Lou xx

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

Whew!...

It's hot in here! I see melted chocolate everywhere! The room is in disarray, and you are disheveled. Lucky guy! You ought to write romance novels. Awesome work, ~ Gee

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Mills and Boone ? LOL

Thanks Gee love lou xx

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Lou

Still waters do run deep! Brilliant write. Pure emotions and truth. My favorite lines: I feel I have loved in a former life and that we will meet eternally Interwoven within each other’s destiny Love, Cat

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Cat

Thanks lou xx

loved

15 years 11 months ago

LOVELY INTER-TWINING

R U a mentor too???? can i have u as mine to help refine some poetry of mine as PM please.

lou

15 years 11 months ago

I'm Not a Mentor LOL

ButI would be willing , and yet I fear you know more than me already. I will help you if you truely want me to. love lou xx

loved

15 years 11 months ago

yes of course

i shall PM a poem or two to u and u may edit,spell chk and gram chk also as my compy has aids so has the doc till i get another one funny no??? and PM back please ur good . i want to compile about 50 poems out of my 2780 odd poems , poems all over as a new venture thanks for the offer here is one coming in a moment