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Doctor Dog

Dear Doctor Dog So many symptoms have I Doctor I’m in troubleOh where do I beginStomach churningKnee’s tremblingHeart poundingPulse racingHeart breakingAll out of time What do you recommend  More symptoms appear Butterflies in the stomachKnee’s turning to jelloHeart pounding so loudlyBeating out of my chestPulse racingHeart breakingAll out of time What’s a girl to do!When thinking of you?Feeling ten feet tallWalking on air... Is there a cure? What is your recipe? For me I am Hungry for extra onions on that dog…..  Electric Blue
— Electric Blue, Jul 04, 2010

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judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

i love doctor dog too

with extra mustard and sauce hi maggie good to see you love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

15 years 11 months ago

DOctor Dog

Judyanne Mustard and Sauce too hot for me ketchup and onions yes I hope I made you want to go out and get one Mmmmmmmmm love and hugs Maggie
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dearest Magz

Had to smile at this one hun loved it love and hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

15 years 11 months ago

Doctor Dog

Jay-cee I thought this would touch your heart or make your mouth water ha. I can taste it now Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm love and hugs Maggie
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

15 years 11 months ago

Doctor Dog

Ann Doctor Dog certainly makes my heart go Boombediboom bediboom bediboom I could do with Doctor Dog now Ha.. always Maggie
yenti

yenti

15 years 11 months ago

Maggie

Thought for one moment there was a twinkle in your eye but knowing Maggie it had to be food, Yours Ian.Tea He He
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

15 years 11 months ago

Doctor Dog

Hello my friend Ian Yes, a twinkle. They are few and far between but by the same ocean blue eyes looking back at me. Did it make you mouth water a friends Hot dog stand! Did you read Coffee and a smoke you might enjoy and make you smile always love maggie
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Maggie

Cute one! Now you've done it, you've gone and made me hungry! Love, Cat
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

15 years 11 months ago

Doctor Dog

Cat Thank you for dropping by to taste the wares It makes me smile when thinking of Doctor Dog enticing me with all the textures and flavours luring me in with the aroma and his words falling from such wonderful lips salivating at the corrners Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Always Maggie