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Jul 04, 2010
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Philandering Philosophy
Philandering Philosophy
Ignoring this, you conquer that,
forsaking endless trouble
fantasies of where it's at
no longer burst your bubble
To say you're here procludes the fact
that you were never there
keeping all your faith intact
with when instead of where
I may look you in the eye
and think your soul is dead
a crashing social butterfly
with blood upon his head
but often is gets used by was
and even more than this
rules get broken just because
of Fate's untimely kiss
I may not think the same as you
nor you the same as me
but even so we journey through
a common misery
Life is nothing more than dream
and death no more than sleep
awaken with your primal scream,
you've promises to keep!
C. Lon R. Bruso
Ignoring this, you conquer that,
forsaking endless trouble
fantasies of where it's at
no longer burst your bubble
To say you're here procludes the fact
that you were never there
keeping all your faith intact
with when instead of where
I may look you in the eye
and think your soul is dead
a crashing social butterfly
with blood upon his head
but often is gets used by was
and even more than this
rules get broken just because
of Fate's untimely kiss
I may not think the same as you
nor you the same as me
but even so we journey through
a common misery
Life is nothing more than dream
and death no more than sleep
awaken with your primal scream,
you've promises to keep!
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Jul 04, 2010
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Lil Z
16 years ago
Haha amazing!
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Lil Z!
faithmairee
16 years ago
Great Poem
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Faith!
Rett
16 years ago
Another superb write
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Rett!
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Wonderful Lonnie!
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Shirley!
judyanne
16 years ago
mind fishing is correct
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Judy!
Roscoe Lane
16 years ago
Absolutely,
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Roscoe!
lou
16 years ago
Deep Stuff......
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, lou!
Kailashana
16 years ago
But I have promises to
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Anna!
mand
16 years ago
yes we journey through a
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Mand!
scribbler
16 years ago
philandering
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, scribbler!
Dennis Go
16 years ago
Great!
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Dennis!
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Cat M'dear!
Professor Purple
16 years ago
Superb!
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Antoine!
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
This is great Lonnie:-
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
This is great Lonnie:-
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
This is great Lonnie:-
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Ann!
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
I battle on with this and that
greeneyes
16 years ago
you are amazing! Loved it,
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Green Eyes!
poewriter58
16 years ago
Lon
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