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Jul 04, 2010
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Philandering Philosophy
Philandering Philosophy
Ignoring this, you conquer that,
forsaking endless trouble
fantasies of where it's at
no longer burst your bubble
To say you're here procludes the fact
that you were never there
keeping all your faith intact
with when instead of where
I may look you in the eye
and think your soul is dead
a crashing social butterfly
with blood upon his head
but often is gets used by was
and even more than this
rules get broken just because
of Fate's untimely kiss
I may not think the same as you
nor you the same as me
but even so we journey through
a common misery
Life is nothing more than dream
and death no more than sleep
awaken with your primal scream,
you've promises to keep!
C. Lon R. Bruso
Ignoring this, you conquer that,
forsaking endless trouble
fantasies of where it's at
no longer burst your bubble
To say you're here procludes the fact
that you were never there
keeping all your faith intact
with when instead of where
I may look you in the eye
and think your soul is dead
a crashing social butterfly
with blood upon his head
but often is gets used by was
and even more than this
rules get broken just because
of Fate's untimely kiss
I may not think the same as you
nor you the same as me
but even so we journey through
a common misery
Life is nothing more than dream
and death no more than sleep
awaken with your primal scream,
you've promises to keep!
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Jul 04, 2010
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Critiques
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Haha amazing!
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Lil Z!
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
Great Poem
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Faith!
Rett
15 years 11 months ago
Another superb write
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Rett!
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Wonderful Lonnie!
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Shirley!
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
mind fishing is correct
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Judy!
Roscoe Lane
15 years 11 months ago
Absolutely,
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Roscoe!
lou
15 years 11 months ago
Deep Stuff......
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, lou!
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
But I have promises to
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Anna!
mand
15 years 11 months ago
yes we journey through a
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Mand!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
philandering
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, scribbler!
Dennis Go
15 years 11 months ago
Great!
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Dennis!
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Cat M'dear!
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
Superb!
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Antoine!
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
This is great Lonnie:-
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
This is great Lonnie:-
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
This is great Lonnie:-
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Ann!
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
I battle on with this and that
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
you are amazing! Loved it,
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Green Eyes!
poewriter58
15 years 11 months ago
Lon