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Food for Thought (Caution: Disturbing) Second in my Horror experiment.

Food for Thought

Awakened by a sharp pain
he struggles to sit up
finding he cannot

it is dark, absolute blackness
not even the remote pinprick
of blessed light

he struggles, but straps
bind him so securely
he can't even raise his head

There are soft scuttling sounds
and squeaks, the feel of
small furry creatures
brushing against his cheek

another sharp pain and he screams.
the scuttling recedes momentarily,
but all too soon, bravery returns
 the squeaking resumes in volume

screaming bands of fire from
razor sharp teeth slashing,
cutting, scooping tortured flesh

a voice cracking from over extended
vocal cords reverberates through
the darkness, finally, subsiding into
the laughter of madness as he
falls over the precipice

The rats don’t care, they continue
their grizzly feast with unconcern…
— Rett, Jul 04, 2010

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Rett

Very creepy! I shuddered as I read this piece. I enjoyed it very much! Always, Cat
Rett

Rett

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks Cat

Trying to see how gruesome I can get w/o totally losing it. *L* Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin
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Lonnie

15 years 11 months ago

A touch of 'Poe', Rett?

LOL!!! Seriously, this is a great read with lots to offer the reader! I thoroughly enjoyed it and will be awaiting more! Very cool!
Rett

Rett

15 years 11 months ago

Thanks Lonnie

I guess you read "The Surgeon" than. *LOL* Just trying my hand. Stretching into a genre I don't usually write. I appreciate the kind words. Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

oh yuk rett

i just start getting interested in your writes and you go all evil-brother-of-eddy styx on me love it anyway one of my biggest nightmares in black and white - ta for the good sleep i'll have tonight - not. love to you all the way across that big blue ocean from one bit of god's country to another judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Rett

Rett

15 years 11 months ago

Sorry Judy

Must be the torturous editing I am doing on my second book right now. Thanks for stopping by and the nice comments. My best to you across the big blue. Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin