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Jul 04, 2010
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When Still Water's Rest
in the sweet-water
of the dreamtime,
I wade with slow
easy steps
it is a waning light
of hope, that illuminates
a compendium in dreams
written as my heart
beats out the ink
from conception,
this story was confused
in death and life
And I hang
over the edge of tsunami
and I balance on pinewood,
the waters flow is stilled
but beats to the heart
of my dreams,
and the moons turn
forever lifts my head
and my spirit,
past the firmament
I am a child of darkness
cocooned in the light,
with the Kaleidoscope
of life and dreams
still writing,
until this pen
in the hand of my heart,
is silenced and at rest
— Seren, Jul 04, 2010
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Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest Jayne-Chloe
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest Cat
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
a very beautiful and graceful write jc
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest Judd
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest seren
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Shirley
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
reat
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Stan
lou
15 years 11 months ago
Jayne
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Lou
mand
15 years 11 months ago
Serene, peaceful images
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest Mand
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
Left me a silence understood
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Mona
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
A big Happy Birthday kiss to her from ME
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest Mona
loved
15 years 11 months ago
U RARELY READ ME.... PERHAPS ITS MY FAULT
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Loved
Geezer
15 years 11 months ago
Hang time...
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Gee
Tam the Chanter
15 years 10 months ago
waders
Seren
15 years 10 months ago
I bow to greater minds than mine smile
Tam the Chanter
15 years 10 months ago
terrific
Seren
15 years 10 months ago
You brought tears to my eyes
Ayaz Warith
15 years 10 months ago
Lovely poem
Seren
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Ayaz
ziggy
15 years 10 months ago
hi jayne
Seren
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Ziggy
KingINwaiting
15 years 10 months ago
Its VERY beautiful. i loved
Seren
15 years 10 months ago
Dear KIng
Bonitaj
15 years 10 months ago
Dear Seren