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Jul 04, 2010
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When Still Water's Rest
in the sweet-water
of the dreamtime,
I wade with slow
easy steps
it is a waning light
of hope, that illuminates
a compendium in dreams
written as my heart
beats out the ink
from conception,
this story was confused
in death and life
And I hang
over the edge of tsunami
and I balance on pinewood,
the waters flow is stilled
but beats to the heart
of my dreams,
and the moons turn
forever lifts my head
and my spirit,
past the firmament
I am a child of darkness
cocooned in the light,
with the Kaleidoscope
of life and dreams
still writing,
until this pen
in the hand of my heart,
is silenced and at rest
— Seren, Jul 04, 2010
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Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dearest Jayne-Chloe
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Cat
judyanne
16 years ago
a very beautiful and graceful write jc
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Judd
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Dearest seren
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Shirley
scribbler
16 years ago
reat
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Stan
lou
16 years ago
Jayne
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Lou
mand
16 years ago
Serene, peaceful images
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Mand
magics02
16 years ago
Left me a silence understood
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years ago
A big Happy Birthday kiss to her from ME
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Mona
loved
16 years ago
U RARELY READ ME.... PERHAPS ITS MY FAULT
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Loved
Geezer
16 years ago
Hang time...
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Gee
Tam the Chanter
16 years ago
waders
Seren
16 years ago
I bow to greater minds than mine smile
Tam the Chanter
16 years ago
terrific
Seren
16 years ago
You brought tears to my eyes
Ayaz Warith
16 years ago
Lovely poem
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Ayaz
ziggy
16 years ago
hi jayne
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Ziggy
KingINwaiting
16 years ago
Its VERY beautiful. i loved
Seren
16 years ago
Dear KIng
Bonitaj
16 years ago
Dear Seren
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