i’m a loser

(I hope this isn't your true attitude towards yourself, or you will get a pm from me extolling your praises) I find this to be an excellent poem and in the long lost past, I have felt like this. My favorite lines: never right and always wrong my life seems to be too long someday i’ll make myself croak punchline to this tragic joke ‘cause i’m a loser Always, Cat

Not sure if this is a serious piece or if its written with tounge in cheek ... but either way its a great poem and I just hope you dont feel like this either love and hugs JayCee x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

Hi !!! (high?) After reading this,and the responses, and your reply, I feel guilty saying I enjoyed this. Who amoung us hasn't felt this way at some point in our life? This is a great write, but to carry this through would be a great wrong. I got past this a loooooong time ago by telling myself;, if nothing else..... I could serve as a bad example. I look foward to your next post. Sue

about as enjoyable as such a self loathing write can get.Glad feelings in your past remember:sometimes people laugh and cheer 'cause they're glad to see you here...scribbler

Hoping to have your permission to say so, I feel more of a sense of humor written into this than any sense of forlornness. Remember: Once a loser, NOT forever a loser! I'm almost afraid to offer any suggestion, as I don't want you to feel that you are "always wrong" and especially not when you are expressing your personal style! ;-) Anyhow, I do like the lack of punctuation, but a couple lines are calling out to me and begging for commas. How about dropping one into the middle of line 5 and another into line 13? Whatever your intent, the result is to good effect. I like it! I like it!

i’m a loser and a reject just not worthy of respect always left out of the game no one but myself to blame life is cruel life is tough and i am not good enough i am always out of luck yes i do know that i suck [[people laugh and people cheer i know they'll mock and they will jeer maybe one day i will stand up maybe when i finally grow up]] still a loser now a boozer a forbidden substance user bury my head in my hands no one truly understands never right and always wrong [[this life just feels too long yet someday i know i'll croak the punchline to this tragic joke]] ‘cause i’m a loser This poem totally reminds me of my "fuck it, I'm not in school, I have no friends, I'm just gonna get high" phase. Good times. :) I put [[brackets]] around the stanza(s)/line(s) I edited/added to because I think they're pretty subtle and you may not notice right away. You're welcome. :) But, I do like this, it reminds me of when the words would just come to me just come and come and come and it felt like they would never stop. I haven't felt that rush in a while. Although, last week I did write 3 incredibly shite poems so maybe I'll get my poetry sparkle back soon :) I realize I've put a lot of smiley faces in here, I guess that's how much your poem has affected me. I think it's another good write, just in need of an edit. Although, what doesn't need an edit? JRS

Always a winner in the end when you realize all your past errors and judgements and learn to grow with each passing day. I left you a pm on the poem from chat and you can go ahead and post it anytime. Will you remind me to take another look at this one again friend? Grazzi Mona xoxox

ALMOST HALF AN HOUR TO TRACK U SO I ADDDDED U AS MY BUDDY U 22 I WROTE A POEM FOR UUUUU PLEASE DO READ IT UR NO LOSER THAN ANY OTHER CANCERIAN THE WORLDS LOSERS SHALL I NAME SOME NELSON MENDELA JULIUS CAESAR AND DIANA THE ROYAL PRINCESS ALL DEPRIVED WHILE ALIVE BUT ONLY THEY LIVE/WILL LIVE IN THE HEARTS OF MANKIND AS U WILL IN PARADISE WHO EVALUATES WINNERS AND LOSERS WHEN NEXT TIME U COME TO THE FAIRVIEW MALL LOOK AROUND AND U SHALL FIND ME STANDING TALL ER THAN ALL FOR I HATE TO ACCEPT MYSELF AS A LOSER WE BECOME WHAT WE SAY SO IF YOU WANT TO BE REMEMBERED ALWAYS AFTER WARDS A LOSER U MAY STAY BUT THEN U SHALL LIVE NOT IN MY HEART BUT FAR ........FAR................ FAR ............ AWAY.

that people do feel like this at times and others' attitudes don't help - many endorsing the feelings of uselessness great write antoine - sorry i'm late love to you judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

you were never a loser, it was just that you could not phantom you, you would have asked you self this question "WHO AM I" when i see me not understanding my self, am always quick to ask me "who am i" i did wrote a poem on this in my page. you are not a loser, because inside of you lies the hero that has always made you an unbeatable winner. just dig in to the real you and the discoveries you would make will stun your wildest imagination. you are a winner! regards chumfin