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Jul 04, 2010
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FREEDOM RINGS FREEDOM SINGS
FOURTH OF JULY 2010
Freedom rings, Freedom sings
Our beautiful flag means everything
Independence day is here again
Time to celebrate with family and friends
Our Fourth Of July is here for all
Let us also remember a comrades fall
With all the soldiers, tried and true
We raise our flag, red, white and blue
Freedom rings, Freedom sings
We thank a soldier for every thing
For we stand to salute our flag today
A wave of glory and beauty this day
Fireworks and frolic is all much fun
Let us remember how it all begun
We celebrate life, we celebrate freedom
We share it with others, there is a reason
Freedom rings, Freedom sings
Let us give thanks for everything
For on this earth, no better place to be
Our freedom sings, to you and to me
mms July 4, 2010
— magics02, Jul 04, 2010
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Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Golden
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Serene
lou
16 years ago
mona
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Lou
faithmairee
16 years ago
Beautifully Done, Mona
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you my Faithmarie
jetz
16 years ago
Mona, What can I say that
magics02
16 years ago
Love at ya Jetz
hobo
16 years ago
nice dedi
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Randy friend
scribbler
16 years ago
freedom
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you my friend Scribe
Electric Blue
16 years ago
Freedom Song
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