Who is there?

Notebooks filled with page after page

ramblings from unwashed minds

Rants,and thoughts of petty rage

responding to words of kind

Jumping to conclusions

Paranoid delusions

Killer's work is never done

Sir Gee rides forth again

Slashing, bashing, kill everyone

Soothing, smoothing, out the pain

Dual personalities

not so different though

Two minds in one head

do they share the same soul?

— Geezer, Jul 03, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

This user supports Neopoet so it can be free to all

Critiques

scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

who

For some reason I kind of liked this.And so did I.........scribbler and Stan

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

So glad...

you guys liked this one. It was written for people just like you. Thanks, ~ Gee

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

I can only wish Sir Gee and Killer many more adventures together dont know if you have noticed it hun but your poetry has changed lately go back and read some of your others ... and then read this you and I have come a long way in words smile love and higgliest bugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

I am aware that I have changed...

Therefore, my poetry has changed. Wether it is for the better, remains to be seen. I guess that I have improved my poetry, by paying attention to the comments of my fellow poets and friends here in Neopoetland, and trying to implement the things I see in their works too. You have changed too, and most definitely, for the better! I don't see just rage, anymore. I still see the occasional flashes of anger, but the warrior-woman, has learned how to wield the sword that she carries with much more finesse. Thank you, love and hig bugs, ~ Gee