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lou
lou

Fisherman

Our souls are as one
the love we share is
constant , nothing can
take that from us

We are entwined
two hearts beating
in perfect unison

You are a fisherman
catching my dreams
plucking me from oblivion

I  want to hide from the world
safe within  your arms
hold you for eternity

— lou, Jul 03, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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Critiques

LZ

Lil Z

15 years 11 months ago

I love this

What a metaphor, this is a good one!
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Hi

Thanks Louxx
Geezer

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

Man....

The guy that gets this poem is a lucky dude! The big catch! The very thing a lot of men just dream about. love and hugs, ~ Gee
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Gee

Thank you Much love Lou xx
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Stan

Thanks Lou xx
M

magics02

15 years 11 months ago

Very nice write Lou

Missed you in chat tonight and last night. Let me know about the music trivia if your still interested. Happy Fourth of July to you and the family Mona xoxo
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Mona

Remember chat nights are in the early hours of the morning for me , I live in the uk. Lyric night is being sorted out. Love lou xx
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Lou, This Is Beautiful

beautifully written and wonderfully romantic...love it, lou! ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

HI

Thanks lou xx
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

wonderful Lou!

you know just how to reel us in! with much love "always" shirl the girl! shirley harrison
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Shirl

thanks love lou xx
hobo

hobo

15 years 11 months ago

This is beautiful

This is beautiful my friend, it touched my heart *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*
lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Randy

Thank you my friend, I'm glad my poem touched you. Much love Lou xx