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Jul 03, 2010
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Fisherman
Our souls are as one
the love we share is
constant , nothing can
take that from us
We are entwined
two hearts beating
in perfect unison
You are a fisherman
catching my dreams
plucking me from oblivion
I want to hide from the world
safe within your arms
hold you for eternity
the love we share is
constant , nothing can
take that from us
We are entwined
two hearts beating
in perfect unison
You are a fisherman
catching my dreams
plucking me from oblivion
I want to hide from the world
safe within your arms
hold you for eternity
— lou, Jul 03, 2010
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Lil Z
16 years ago
I love this
lou
16 years ago
Hi
Geezer
16 years ago
Man....
lou
16 years ago
Gee
scribbler
16 years ago
you are a fisherman catching
lou
16 years ago
Stan
magics02
16 years ago
Very nice write Lou
lou
16 years ago
Mona
faithmairee
16 years ago
Lou, This Is Beautiful
lou
16 years ago
HI
shirley harrison
16 years ago
wonderful Lou!
lou
16 years ago
Shirl
hobo
16 years ago
This is beautiful
lou
16 years ago
Randy
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