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DOOM'S DOOR
And on dooms door
three knocks are heard and more,
as the beaten drum the heart, the stride,
the flung down glove of fate,
decides the pace, the rate of sinking, melt,
the cries of crickets, cicada's rhythm dance
their feet serrated, mating, grating, grinding down
its fissures gaping gasping yawns of jaws
with out applause,
the music relentless bludgeons on,
reverberates through oceans floors
with sonar-sounds like whales for miles
around the globe of our round whole,
and strikes it in two, in three or four,
until there is no sign of it, no form,
analogous with air
its dissipating awareness flawed,
invisible currents, tangled weeds,
draw deeper, fathoms beneath the common
face of place,
the frown of death and its menacing grimace,
looms in the murky grime, clouded polluted brine,
no longer clear and bright but tarnished,
bleached, and boney
stolen pigments, figments of the mind
grind and grind into the sediment
lulled by the beat of wave and stone and shell,
created music, Nell, the devil-laced booty
rots with centuries of swaying evidence
of past deeds, slowly disintegrates,
while weeping wails smooth out,
they leave no trace
of what this life was all about.
Critiques
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
WoW Ann
mand
15 years 11 months ago
I agree with Xena, powerful,
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest ~
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
Xena, Jayne and mand, dear you.
Mari Shine
15 years 11 months ago
Your great love for Mother
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, thank you Mari Shine