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DOOM'S DOOR

  "DOOM'S DOOR" Ann 3rd July 2010.

 

And on dooms door 

three knocks are heard and more,

as the beaten drum the heart, the stride, 

the flung down glove of fate,

decides the pace, the rate of sinking, melt, 

 

the cries of crickets, cicada's rhythm dance

their feet serrated, mating, grating, grinding down

its fissures gaping gasping yawns of jaws

with out applause,

 

the music relentless bludgeons on, 

reverberates through oceans floors 

with sonar-sounds like whales for miles

around the globe of our round whole, 

and strikes it in two, in three or four,

until there is no sign of it, no form, 

 

analogous with air 

its dissipating awareness flawed, 

invisible currents, tangled weeds, 

draw deeper, fathoms beneath the common

face of place, 

 

the frown of death and its menacing grimace,

looms in the murky grime, clouded polluted brine, 

no longer clear and bright but tarnished, 

bleached, and boney 

stolen pigments, figments of the mind

grind and grind into the sediment

 

lulled by the beat of wave and stone and shell,

created music, Nell, the devil-laced booty

rots with centuries of swaying evidence 

of past deeds, slowly disintegrates, 

while weeping wails smooth out, 

they leave no trace 

of what this life was all about. 


 

 


— Nordic cloud, Jul 03, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

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xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

WoW Ann

A wonderful powerful write. I especially love the last stanza... "lulled by the beat of wave and stone and shell, created music, Nell, the devil-laced booty rots with centuries of swaying evidence of past deeds, slowly disintegrates, while weeping wails smooth out, they leave no trace of what this life was all about?" Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
mand

mand

15 years 11 months ago

I agree with Xena, powerful,

I agree with Xena, powerful, expressive and I love the way you incorporate nature in your poems. Happy to see you back. Hope your o.k. Love to you Mand xxxx
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dearest ~

I am speechless ... and I know you know why just a big ass hug from down under ... wish I could stretch my arms all the way round to you and give you a hug love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

Xena, Jayne and mand, dear you.

Ann of Norway I haven't been totally away, I am not going to have an op. after all, it will be another kind of treatment instead!! But I still might be a little more absent minded and a little less attentive to you dear friends, so please excuse me if you feel that is the case. And thank you all for you lovely comments. Yes mand nature is my first teacher in life how could I not include her/him/it in my poetry. Jayne your arms go round the whole world in your poems and with your interest and concern for your fellow poets so devotedly you look after us all in spite of the taxing job it is, thank you I feel your arms and thank you many times more. Xena, I love that you enjoyed that last verse it has the fallen treasure of life's history and creates much research and excitement for the generations that come after; how exciting it must be to dive down and find booty, wonderfully interesting isn't it? Love to you too. And to you all three from me, I am fine, and shall remain so too, you'll see! Ann. XXXOOO-one each, now don't be greedy!!!!!!!
MS

Mari Shine

15 years 11 months ago

Your great love for Mother

Your great love for Mother Nature shows through in this delightfully penned write Ann. Very powerful in content and so well expressed, the words flow effortlessly through your golden poetic pen and as always, are a great joy to read. Thank You so very much for sharing Ann.