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Jul 03, 2010
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The Surgeon (Caution: Disturbing Content)
The Surgeon
Feathery carresses across alabaster skin
rivulets of crimson slowly ooze forth
terrified eyes staring in stunned disbelief
her screams smothered by the gag as
gloves of ebony black with razor bladed tips
gently kiss her previously unmarred visage
eliciting silent screams with orbs tight closed
in a rictus of agony
How did she get here where evil reigns supreme
where the cold marble beneath her feet is stained
with the blood of sacrifices to the insanity
of a diseased mind rotting like putrid flesh?
Manacled hands beseach mercy from one unknowing
of the finer emotion, but only the lines he traces
in slow running rivulets to flow silently
down trembling thighs and legs to pool in silence
beneath feet still enclosed by stylish heels
Her tenderest secrets revealed to the slow blades
of the gloves as the cruel face smiles in an ecstacy
bordering on an unbelievably intense orgasm
Her shapely legs give way to weakness as she hangs
from the chains wrapped through the manacles
that allow him to watch every blink, each mounting
realization that no escape is possible.
The blood slowly drains from the veins he has opened
with surgical precision, as if each location is known,
he gives himself up wholly to the divine and powerful
tastes of warm life lapped greedily from her tortured body
as it slowly goes limp in death.
No more the streets and alleyways slashing with no finesse,
but the slow agony in uninterupted privacy to enjoy
for hours while he slakes the thist for pain and suffering.
The Surgeon smiles in pleasure as he contemplates who will be
next...
Feathery carresses across alabaster skin
rivulets of crimson slowly ooze forth
terrified eyes staring in stunned disbelief
her screams smothered by the gag as
gloves of ebony black with razor bladed tips
gently kiss her previously unmarred visage
eliciting silent screams with orbs tight closed
in a rictus of agony
How did she get here where evil reigns supreme
where the cold marble beneath her feet is stained
with the blood of sacrifices to the insanity
of a diseased mind rotting like putrid flesh?
Manacled hands beseach mercy from one unknowing
of the finer emotion, but only the lines he traces
in slow running rivulets to flow silently
down trembling thighs and legs to pool in silence
beneath feet still enclosed by stylish heels
Her tenderest secrets revealed to the slow blades
of the gloves as the cruel face smiles in an ecstacy
bordering on an unbelievably intense orgasm
Her shapely legs give way to weakness as she hangs
from the chains wrapped through the manacles
that allow him to watch every blink, each mounting
realization that no escape is possible.
The blood slowly drains from the veins he has opened
with surgical precision, as if each location is known,
he gives himself up wholly to the divine and powerful
tastes of warm life lapped greedily from her tortured body
as it slowly goes limp in death.
No more the streets and alleyways slashing with no finesse,
but the slow agony in uninterupted privacy to enjoy
for hours while he slakes the thist for pain and suffering.
The Surgeon smiles in pleasure as he contemplates who will be
next...
— Rett, Jul 03, 2010
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Rett
16 years ago
Thank you Annie
DawningDaytripper
16 years ago
Eh it was ok, I mean if you
Rett
16 years ago
Thanks daughter
themoonman
16 years ago
Damn...
Rett
16 years ago
Many thanks Richard
xena465
16 years ago
Geeze!!!
Rett
16 years ago
Muchly appreciated Xena
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Rett
Rett
16 years ago
Thanks so much Cat
Rett
16 years ago
See what you think of this Annie
xena465
16 years ago
WoW Rett
Rett
16 years ago
I don't dare
judyanne
16 years ago
it has alll been said i think
Rett
16 years ago
Thanks Judy
Beauregard
16 years ago
Kelsey is pleased
Rett
16 years ago
Rett is pleased that you are.
Morgana Tragic…
16 years ago
WHOA Dad!!!!!! That was
Rett
16 years ago
Uh OH. I woke Morgana?
Morgana Tragic…
16 years ago
Hehehe… “If I wasn’t
Lonnie
16 years ago
Like Kelsey, I am pleased!
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