judyanne

Jul 02, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Aspect

Blink at me no longer we are done.

We have been up and down all the way to the end

and now I close the door marked innocence.

For akin to an elusive shadow

shedding shade across the sky,

when time is marked with before and after

perspective shuts out the universe.

— judyanne, Jul 02, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

Critiques

Seren

16 years ago

Profound read Judd …

Profound read Judd ... beautifully done as is becoming expected ;) oi oi oi love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks jc

oi oi oi back at yu love and hugs judd xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

xena465

16 years ago

Dearest Judy

A very heartfelt read, I love, love it. If only we could change the world and let the lost sheep see the future through our eyes. Alas, we have so many dysfunctional people in the world that makes this impossible. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

judyanne

16 years ago

hi rosina

thanks hun for the great comment love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

Restlesslittlesoul

16 years ago

SO good!

So beautifully written, and such a depth to it! http://restlesslittlesoul.webs.com

judyanne

16 years ago

thank you ana

lovely to see you, i will catch up with your writes very soon love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Aspect...

Very deep and a little bit dark. just the kind of poem that eddy styx approves of and enjoys! Always, eddy/cat

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks cat

i think perhaps he has rubbed off on me a little - i am really enjoying his (your) book love to you and your knee judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

loved

16 years ago

anything short of lovely

......will be not befitting gr8888888888 poem and thoughts

judyanne

16 years ago

hello loved

thank you for visiting - lovely to see you thanks for the appreciation love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

hobo

16 years ago

very nice

This is very nice my friend. I love the very first line Blink at me no longer we are done. love it *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*

judyanne

16 years ago

playing with thoughts randy

thanks for the read and comment love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

faithmairee

16 years ago

Such Depth To Your Thoughts

short but profound...enjoyed it alot, Judy love-faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

judyanne

16 years ago

hi faith

just thoughts i feel i want to add to this one i guess i'll find the words when the time is right thanks for calling by your visit appreciated i'm enjoying your writes by the way love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks annie

for the visit and supportive comment love to you judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

shirley harrison

16 years ago

i'm late!

wonderful as ever Judy Judy, your Title is brilliant and the poetry very deep and strong May i bow to theeee! with much love shirley harrison

judyanne

16 years ago

thank you shirley

you are always so lovely and say such supportive things love to you judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

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