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loved

Jul 02, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Two IN one COMMEnts poems for friends

Your World

The world was always young
We only age through time,
And
As we grow old
We change our blooming mind.
From bloomers
It becomes blooming
Never that you mind.

Where in this young
Small and compact world
Can strangers
So well combine?
You are fine
You are fine
You are fine

For a moment

My heart stopped...
Wow the readers
My one time good friends
Return....

My respects for you
I am so happy
you still remember me
And
For wrong impressions
Rendered, if any
Thou shall pardon me.

You are like kids for me
I am a lover of nature
And
Poetry
I thank thee
I than thee
I thank thee

— loved, Jul 02, 2010

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shirley harrison

16 years ago

so wonderful your are!

what a joy to read your magical poetry as you Thee "so unique" theeeeeeeeeeeee much love to loved! shirley harrison

16 years ago

You’re a strange little

You're a strange little duck in a big pond. Quack Quack Quack... from another stranger still. ;-) The whole modern world has divided itself into Conservatives and Progressives. The business of Progressives is to go on making mistakes. The business of the Conservatives is to prevent the mistakes from being corrected. G.K. Chesteron

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shirley harrison

16 years ago

loved

2 in 1 comments poems for friends i totaly get it L:O:L for those who are special you will comment with another poem? Ah i have seen a glymps of you dear Loved! shirley harrison

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16 years ago

friends

hard for this friend to return having never left lol.Really liked entire 2nd stanza of over all good write.......scribbler

16 years ago

rock on loved

to your own music and beat i love it love to you judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

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