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Jul 02, 2010
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Two IN one COMMEnts poems for friends
Your World
The world was always young
We only age through time,
And
As we grow old
We change our blooming mind.
From bloomers
It becomes blooming
Never that you mind.
Where in this young
Small and compact world
Can strangers
So well combine?
You are fine
You are fine
You are fine
For a moment
My heart stopped...
Wow the readers
My one time good friends
Return....
My respects for you
I am so happy
you still remember me
And
For wrong impressions
Rendered, if any
Thou shall pardon me.
You are like kids for me
I am a lover of nature
And
Poetry
I thank thee
I than thee
I thank thee
— loved, Jul 02, 2010
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shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
so wonderful your are!
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
You’re a strange little
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
loved
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
friends
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
rock on loved