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  I hope I do not blow it,'Cause I'm new to Neopoet.With elf as literary escort,Itself - a weird treat!To the muse I think I owe it,By seed of thought, you sow it;For crop and vine to grow it,Like bread and wine, to greet. I hope I do not blow it,As your mint and made inchoate,I can form a willing cohort,Or send a chilling tweet.If it's bullshit, then we hoe it,True style; the way we show it,Or how far you can throw it,And keep on smelling sweet! I hope I do not blow it,'Cause I'm new to Neopoet.If you tell me just to stow it,I will try to be discreet.But one thing, you must know it,Decipher or encode it,If it's game then I'll explode it,And offer all the meat!  
— Australad, Jul 02, 2010

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Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Australad

I loved your poem ... Welcome to Neopoet ... Do you know our weirdelf ? hes another aussie ? thanks for teaching me a new word for the day inchoate :) look forward to reading more from you kind regards JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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Australad

15 years 11 months ago

Weird Elf

Yes JayCee, I do know said article, but only as his avatar 'Jess'. (It is he that is responsible for my introduction to this site). Best Wishes, David.
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

a welcome for us

and here is a welcome for you! great poem! shirley harrison
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

A Heartfelt Welcome

Welcome. I'm still new here myself but want to say hi. I enjoyed your poem. Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

new

hey you're not that new.Been here almost as long as I have lol.good write with complicated rhyme scheme I think I already welcomed you? in Obama poem,but I'll welcome you again to be sure......scribbler
weirdelf

weirdelf

15 years 11 months ago

well, mate, I’ve told you

well, mate, I've told you how to really become a part of this site. Give critique on other's works. You have the skills, don't with-hold them selfishly or through fear, Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,