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Just Beautiful

  The most beautiful sight I've ever seenSuch beauty has never been foundI catch you staring back at meBut you never make a sound Your eyes are like a crystal seaSo deep and full of loveI know for sure you're one of a kindThat was sent from Heaven above Your smile can keep me hypnotizedI can stare at you for daysI can tell the world of your awesomenessIn a million different ways I just can't seem to get anything doneWhenever you're in the roomMy eyes won't let me look awayMy purpose you consume What would I do without youMy vision of perfectionMy wife just told me to stop itI've been staring at my own reflection 
— Whiskurz, Jul 02, 2010

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raskin

15 years 11 months ago

Just great, sounds so

Just great, sounds so romantic then the punch line. Well done! raskin
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

PMSL

loved it Regard JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)