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Jul 02, 2010
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The Just
...And twinned by soul lake
The ground was ice beneath her buttocks
He saw flowers in the stone
With carnivore heads
Figures and beasts in the cracks
In lonely strand wall
The terrible sound of night
Was the beating heart of a woman
Yearning chains over ankle and brain
Statues walked free of thought
And light spriralled beneath his gaze
Glass shattered from a stray thought
Stirred from the bowel depths of his hell
The mind split in two in contention
with itself
Angels stepped free from the Paradise island
Devils draped in hermaphrodite danced
Words syrupped from the lips of a woman
he no longer knew
Oil weeped from the ears
Myrrh from the mouths of Babel's children
Fire in the eyes of strangers
Thorns in the breast, in the heart
She crept free from a spot
By the shoreline where he'd plotted
his own death
Mounted the skies to his bed
Melting ice through his window
Drunk with the blood of his thoughts
Draping her breasts
Flesh her flame
And with her, Death, came
The silent awakening...
In a dream a misted isle
A low valley, a temple in ruins
And a woman oil black head to toe
The soul for so long in waiting
To take him inside
The light filled his room
A bird singing
Slow shifting wing
Wallowing love in her throat
For a moment it was as though the wind had ceased to swirl
The body above the mattress like ice and eyes never to open
again...
The ground was ice beneath her buttocks
He saw flowers in the stone
With carnivore heads
Figures and beasts in the cracks
In lonely strand wall
The terrible sound of night
Was the beating heart of a woman
Yearning chains over ankle and brain
Statues walked free of thought
And light spriralled beneath his gaze
Glass shattered from a stray thought
Stirred from the bowel depths of his hell
The mind split in two in contention
with itself
Angels stepped free from the Paradise island
Devils draped in hermaphrodite danced
Words syrupped from the lips of a woman
he no longer knew
Oil weeped from the ears
Myrrh from the mouths of Babel's children
Fire in the eyes of strangers
Thorns in the breast, in the heart
She crept free from a spot
By the shoreline where he'd plotted
his own death
Mounted the skies to his bed
Melting ice through his window
Drunk with the blood of his thoughts
Draping her breasts
Flesh her flame
And with her, Death, came
The silent awakening...
In a dream a misted isle
A low valley, a temple in ruins
And a woman oil black head to toe
The soul for so long in waiting
To take him inside
The light filled his room
A bird singing
Slow shifting wing
Wallowing love in her throat
For a moment it was as though the wind had ceased to swirl
The body above the mattress like ice and eyes never to open
again...
— Dalton, Jul 02, 2010
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Critiques
raskin
15 years 11 months ago
Very good imagery, like a
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear John
Dalton
15 years 11 months ago
Thankyou Seren
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
You master these stories
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
very deep poetry!
Dalton
15 years 11 months ago
thankyou all for your kind
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Dear John
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
awesome write dalton
amalzamani
15 years 11 months ago
Is She
Dalton
15 years 11 months ago
Sorry no I wasn’t thinking of Azrail
amalzamani
15 years 11 months ago
Izra'eel
Dalton
15 years 11 months ago
I was thinking only the last
Mari Shine
15 years 11 months ago
This is an amazing
Dalton
15 years 11 months ago
thankyou