faithmairee

Jul 02, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

not all love is pure

not all love is pure
this my dear, you must know
still my love for you is always
as fresh as the morning snow

since our separation
i've cried an ocean of tears
for the hand that fate has dealt us
has given life to all my fears

— faithmairee, Jul 02, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Florida, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Edna St. Vincent Millay, Lucille Clifton and Elizabeth Bishop

Critiques

whitetea

16 years ago

Romantic separation is very

Romantic separation is very difficult, especially after a long amount of time. I like your honest writing here.

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thank You

Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I appreciate them. ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

shirley harrison

16 years ago

so sad

but so true and beautifully written also with tenderness, and i beleive love does make us all cry oceans of tears for every type of love! this is a little piece of Magic! with love shirley harrison

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thank You, Shirley

I'm honored by your wonderful comments. Your feedback is really appreciated. Thanks so much! Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

faithmairee

16 years ago

Dear Annie

Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It means a lot to me. Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

scribbler

16 years ago

poem

short,sad and to the point.max. impact with min. words........scribbler

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thank You

Thank you so much for the feedback. I appeciate your comments very much. ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

hobo

16 years ago

I can't tell you

I can't tell you how much I love your work. it is awesome my friend *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*

faithmairee

16 years ago

You Don't Know

You don't know how wonderful that makes me feel. Thank you dear, hobo! ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Faith

I loved this one ... but I thought this ? could be expanded a little and flesh out the story some more but thats just my opinion ... nice work well done love JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thank you JayCee

Thank you for stopping by and for your feedback. Comments are always welcome. ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

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