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Dennis Go
Dennis Go
Jul 01, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Greenhouse Effect

To me
You are
The heating sun,
Giver of life,
Shower of warmth.

I am
To you
The iceberg
Melting.
— Dennis Go, Jul 01, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Manila, PHL

Favorite Poets: R.S. Thomas, William Blake, Emily Dickinson, Dylan Thomas

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Mari Shine

16 years ago

Greenhouse Effect.

Oh Dennis, what a wonderfully penned metaphoric write this is! It's beauty took my breath away as I read! You express your feelings so sensually and compliment what you say in relation to your loved one, with your opposite reaction/response. So concise, your sharply defined images are so appealing to the reader Dennis. A beautiful flawless, brilliant, resplendent poetic gem - with such a satin smooth flow and delicious, effortless expression. A joy to read! Thank you so very much for sharing Dennis.
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Again, beautiful Dennis

I wish I could say so much in so little words. You have a great talent. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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anonymous1

16 years ago

Small Poems

I am fond of small poems that say much. I am fond of your poem and its warmth and hope. Thank you, Lisa
Dennis Go

Dennis Go

16 years ago

Thanks Lisa

Thanks for your kind comment. I'll add you up on my buddylist if you don't mind :)

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