hobo

Jul 01, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Bella Sometimes

Mia Bella

sometimes I see her
when she doesn't see me
and she takes my breath away
her beauty is hidden in her privacy
people see her everyday
and never see her

but I do

Mia Bella
sometimes she has a far away look
in her eyes
and I know the secrets of her soul
the secrets that she herself
doesn't even know she knows

but I know

Mia Bella
sometime she cries
but there are never any tears
so she doesn't know she is crying

but I do

— hobo, Jul 01, 2010

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Critiques

Seren

16 years ago

O mio babino caro … thats

O mio babino caro ... thats the song your poem reminded me of do not ask me why its 4am and i am sleep deprived lol ... beautiful poem Randy she should be proud your wife love and hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

hobo

16 years ago

hot off the press

I just wrote this one about 30 minutes ago, please let me know what you think about it. and thank everyone so much for telling me to post when I can and then get caught up on my commenting when I can. I will I promise. *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*

faithmairee

16 years ago

Beautiful

You write such beautiful poetry. This one really moved me. It's wonderful. ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

shirley harrison

16 years ago

"che Bello"

that means what beauty! you are a wonderful soulful man Randy A true Gentleman in this world so kind and genuin i love you to bits!Ti voglio tanto bene! ciao Bello! shirley harrison

raj

16 years ago

if i have to describe this

if i have to describe this wonderful write of yours i would use just two words "soul loving" i felt touched by your write... raj (sublime_ocean)

magics02

16 years ago

I agree with Ocean too

Soul loving gentle Ben/Hobo. Great write dear friend and hoping you are doing well and be back here with us soon. Love and Peace ciao Bella Mia :) Mona

lou

16 years ago

Randy

Pretty and well written. Much love Lou xx

xena465

16 years ago

Captivating dear Hobo

We girls so love this side of you too. Beautiful romantic images. One thing I noticed in this line... {sometime} she cries ……………….[sometimes] Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

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