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Jul 01, 2010
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Green Grass
The grass is never greener
than when you stop
and see
each blade
in all it's glory
than when you stop
and see
each blade
in all it's glory
— faerybeki, Jul 01, 2010
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faerybeki
16 years ago
:) thank You for reading and
themoonman
16 years ago
Beki...
faerybeki
16 years ago
Thank you Richard :) I only
Kailashana
16 years ago
THIS is why I love brevity
faerybeki
16 years ago
Sometimes it only takes a
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Beki
faerybeki
16 years ago
yep, too long indeed, miss
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Beki
faerybeki
16 years ago
Always good to go to bed
xena465
16 years ago
Hello Faerybeki
faerybeki
16 years ago
Hi Xena, nice to meet you ;)
xena465
16 years ago
Hi Beki, nice to meet you too.
yenti
16 years ago
Little Moonraker
faerybeki
16 years ago
Of course I’ll take of
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
Lovely blade of grass Beki
faerybeki
16 years ago
Darling Ann, blow and squeal
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
Your baby will purr and squeal.
Race_9togo
16 years ago
Oi
faerybeki
16 years ago
Hee hee :) I only wish I
judyanne
16 years ago
simplicity at its best
faerybeki
16 years ago
So happy you think so Judy
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