I'm broken

nothing like the secrets a woman scorned will give away eh? shame that the car had to suffer - it is always the innocent.... i really like the lines 'with your bimbo attached to your hand' good write love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

My suggestions are in [brackets]. I wasn’t watching the track My eyes were unseeing as I thought of you [You] had my heart at hello But, I’d never tell you that Your laugh, your smile, your everything just drove me crazy My love for you was so deep that it felt like fire burning in my veins It brought me to my knees Your betrayal twisted a dagger [into] my chest until I [choked] on my own blood [You] [took] everything when [you] left my heart, my soul with you when you walked out the door with your bimbo attached to your hand The hand that used to gently rub my back and caress my cheek Unknowingly I stomped on the gas I hit the corner on the track way [too] fast everthing flashed before my eyes and I realized you weren’t worth my death I hit the brake and I spun like hell My beautiful car swerved into the wall slamming me to a halt I see you laugh as I’m pulled from my car and I don’t care I win ‘cause after all my cuts and bruises can be mended [but] [You're] going to have that disease for a while You know the one the bimbo gave you[?] Oops[!] I forgot that was a secret -- You're right girl, they aren't worth losing your life or your happiness over! Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allan Poe "If technique is of no interest to a writer, I doubt that the writer is an artist." -Marianne Moore