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faithmairee
faithmairee
Jul 01, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

love is everything

if i should live to be one-hundred
i still shall not forget
the love that lives inside of me
the one that never quits

i found a touch of heaven
in the brush of his finger tips
there was magic in the soft words
he whispered with tender lips

to a woman love is everything
she puts her whole heart in it
and even when all hope is gone
her mind still dabbles in it


— faithmairee, Jul 01, 2010

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Region, Country: Florida, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Edna St. Vincent Millay, Lucille Clifton and Elizabeth Bishop

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loved

loved

16 years ago

love it

...just lovely thoughts except i wouldn't like to live a hundred years why so long a life ones life should be long enough to be worthwhile and useful
faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thank You Loved

Yes, that is really a lot of years. LOL. Thanks for your lovely comments, loved. ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thanks, Green Eyes

Thank you for your wonderful comment. I always appreciate your feedback. ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Dear Faith

Real love, you can't put a price on it. And when it comes from Faith, it's priceless...nice one. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thank You, Xena

Your wonderful remarks made my heart smile. Your feedback is always appreciated. ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
hobo

hobo

16 years ago

This is beautiful

This is beautiful my friend, this is what love is all about I wish I would have written it. beautiful indeed *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*
faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

Somehow Thank You Seems Inadequate

I am honored by your wonderful comments. Somehow thank you seems inadequate. I appreciate your remarks so much. Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

So True, Annie

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for taking the time to comment. Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

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