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Dream Catcher

Spider like weaving,
with feathers and beads,
A thing of beauty,
protecting my needs,
Keeping bad dreams
so far at bay,
I sleep all night,
and can face the day.

Hanging on a nail,
right above my bed,
blocking nightmares,
the ones that I dread,
letting in only good dreams,
filled with things that are bright,
so I embrace bed time,
and don't fear the night.

I've had you so long,
before you were the rage,
given to me by a woman,
withered with age,
not a tooth in her mouth,
her eyes could not see,
but she felt trouble in my soul,
and  gave you to me.

She had a table full,
of things that she made,
she sold them to travelers,
this is how she got paid,
I handed her some money,
she shook her head sadly,
told me it was a gift,
so I took it gladly.

When I turned to thank her,
she was no longer there,
she and her table of treasure,
disappeared in thin air,
I asked a man who she was,
he knew not what i meant,
so I knew right away,
she was heavenly sent.

Dream catcher, dream catcher,
I love you so,
where you really came from,
I will never know,
a better friend,
I will never find,
without your protection,
I would lose my mind.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

— greeneyes, Jun 30, 2010

About This Poem

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Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Very Lovely

I love dream catchers. You did a great job of describing what they are for and in telling how you received your dream catcher. One tiny thing I saw was in the line "giving to me by a woman" I think you meant "given to me... Loved your poem. Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

I have Goose bumps!

Dear Green Eyes what beauty, and its like you were talking to me, i suffer terribly bad dreams and around 7 years ago my friend brought me one home from South Africa,and do you know "It works" mine has feathers and beeds too and its right on the wall in the middle of my bed! Do you know that i hoover it to take the bad dreams from the net! How funny Your poem is stunning you have a mountain of talent, with much love.... shirley harrison
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

Beautiful write. I so love the title too. Lovely flow and meaning. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

I really loved this one hun there is something about dreamcatchers I have one as well lol ... mine is a purple and has feathers and crystal beads all over it lmao Shirley I dust the dreams off mine love and big hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

OOOOOoooOoOoO You two have

OOOOOoooOoOoO You two have given me and idea for a poem a thousand thank yous lol inspirations everywhere in this place lol love JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

dont forget

to put our names on it! L:O:L go write you dream poetess! shirley harrison
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Shirley

Ive already got the idea on paper and I am going to work on it shortly ... it will be called to the dreamcatchers ;) you will know its for you and Elizabeth lol love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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poewriter58

15 years 11 months ago

Green eyes

Very nicely done indeed. You've woven a story into your poem. A pleasant read Chrys
hobo

hobo

15 years 11 months ago

Very nice write

This is really nice work my friend, I really like the lines Hanging on a nail, right above my bed, blocking nightmares, the ones that I dread, letting in only good dreams, filled with things that are bright, so I embrace bed time, and don’t fear the night. *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

WHEN DO I POEMISE SOMEONE ASKED

Why Poets hanker for recognition When i praise and poemise i mean it or else i shan't read i wish this you knew we all are poets unique in a class some smile some pass others look amazed many are dazed how the hell the one like me can compose extempore poetry like this one they can see and say........ is it,,,,,err,, you............ is it you,,,,,,,, is it you
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

15 years 11 months ago

Dream Catcher

Green eyes Wonderful - I have dream catchers in every window and within I have put beautiful crystals so when i wake in the morning rainbows fill my room and at night the rainbows just change colour. Dreams are all i have and hold onto my friend just slippin and slidin through the day and the night dreams to hold onto oh what a delight. just wonderful Electric Blue
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Elizabeth

A lovely piece, one to dream on. My favorite lines: I’ve had you so long, before you were the rage, given to me by a woman, withered with age, not a tooth in her mouth, her eyes could not see, but she felt trouble in my soul, and gave you to me. Love, Cat