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The Rainbow

                 The Rainbow


       I walk along the waters edge

            a gull cries out to me

       A gentle rain is falling

            and it mixes with the sea

       My heart so loves this scene

            this special place in time

       When the world is moving slowly

            my thoughts are only mine


       Of all the places I have been

            and every place I've seen

       None comes even close for me

            certainly none so serene

       I walk along at my own pace

             looking far out to sea

       Only way this could be better

           is if you were here with me


       The clouds begin to thicken

            the rain picks up its pace

       I raise my eyes up to the sky

            as the rain falls on my face

       I let the rain drops cool me

            I let them trickle down

       The tears fall freely from my eyes

            and I never make a sound


       To some the tears mean sadness

            to me a cleansing force

       Much the same as the ocean

            keeps me heading right on course

       As the rain soaks through my clothing

            my thoughts again with you

       I walk on in my silence

            it's inner peace that I pursue


       The sky begins to clear

            the rain starts to slow

       The warmth comes from the sun

            and I know it's time to go

       Once again I look on high

            just to thank the lord above 

       A rainbow does appear

            sent to me from God with love.



— jetz, Jun 30, 2010

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Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

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jetz

jetz

15 years 11 months ago

Thank you darlin. You are

Thank you darlin. You are with me always...just not always as close as I would prefer. I love you. me
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Sue

(I just read your, smile and say goodbye... poem and found it really touched me deeply, sad but what a beautiful write. Hooded Stranger recommended it to me. I love this write, too My favorite lines: To some the tears mean sadness to me a cleansing force Much the same as the ocean keeps me heading right on course As the rain soaks through my clothing my thoughts again with you I walk on in my silence it’s inner peace that I pursue You are fast becoming one of my favorite poets. You have such a style and grace about you. Always, Cat
jetz

jetz

15 years 11 months ago

Hi Cat, Wow. You caught me

Hi Cat, Wow. You caught me off guard with your wonderful comment. Coming from you I am truly humbled. I am glad that something I have written could move you to say such complimentary words. Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know. It is greatly appreciated. I was afraid this one would come across as "too nice." Live and learn. Sue