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The Rainbow
The Rainbow
I walk along the waters edge
a gull cries out to me
A gentle rain is falling
and it mixes with the sea
My heart so loves this scene
this special place in time
When the world is moving slowly
my thoughts are only mine
Of all the places I have been
and every place I've seen
None comes even close for me
certainly none so serene
I walk along at my own pace
looking far out to sea
Only way this could be better
is if you were here with me
The clouds begin to thicken
the rain picks up its pace
I raise my eyes up to the sky
as the rain falls on my face
I let the rain drops cool me
I let them trickle down
The tears fall freely from my eyes
and I never make a sound
To some the tears mean sadness
to me a cleansing force
Much the same as the ocean
keeps me heading right on course
As the rain soaks through my clothing
my thoughts again with you
I walk on in my silence
it's inner peace that I pursue
The sky begins to clear
the rain starts to slow
The warmth comes from the sun
and I know it's time to go
Once again I look on high
just to thank the lord above
A rainbow does appear
sent to me from God with love.
Critiques
jetz
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you darlin. You are
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Sue
jetz
15 years 11 months ago
Hi Cat, Wow. You caught me