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Toronto 1

I tramped my early time 

In Kingsway roads so said by English

Names of kings and queens and princes.

Grown among the Humber flow,

Ravine side scrambler,

Adventurer,

Salamander hunter,

Clamberer of my dangerous heights,

Now but a shoulder lifted tug,

A distance to hoist and hug.

 

I tramped along the unlocked time

To pass the open doors and linger

For the bread man’s basket at the back,

For the laundry strung by patterns placed,

For the milk man’s bottles, thick cream on top,

For the front flung open, the delivery calls.

The world came in – my world went out.

Now doors there are to touch, mankind’s

But just by keys, to close behind.

 

I tramped with the horse clomp’s end

Of wagons pulled, by finished war delayed.

The sound made soon to power’s noise,

Packed and wrapped by glory chrome

That bragged by curves and glint

And gathered neighbors homage round

To greet the new, and speak

Expert each of specs and speed and style.

Now good sense is seen as best

With some regretted loss of innocence.

 

 

I tramped among the unknown voices

Of other places poured upon our grid

Of tastes and smells combined

Of soundings sensed in tabled tours

Of changes charged to leave behind

My own English Irish city’s start to be

This now boundless blend of peoples’ parts

Played first in streets of new arrival

Drifting daily in our current’s tide

That casts us all a chorus on Ontario’s side.

Now the other places are surprise,

Where no faces but like my own arise.

 

I am a tramp

Wearing ragged jagged time

To rummage places where past is present

Knowing for well and worst

The changes that my forbears feared

Have wrought alive at least my love

Of all the difference that makes us same

In this city huged in my drifting days

Coloured, touched and made

From universal unbounded rays

In fond and unexpected ways.

 
— ArrowWords, Jun 30, 2010

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Country/Region: CAN

Favorite Poets: Dylan Thomas, Walt Whitman, Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Leonard Cohen, Constantine Cavafy

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anonymous1

15 years 11 months ago

Your words...

Your words are well aimed arrows indeed. What a rich quiver you have. There's so much about this poem that has endeared me to it. I love the constant movement of the tramp-like existence; the quiet, unobtrusive observances of every living thing and their place in the world; and the sounds and textures of every fabric from the city to the country. I especially like how you carved the past into the present in each stanza with wonderful flow. I wouldn't know how to make this better. I would love to hear your insight and the reason for the title. Thank you, Lisa Nominated
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ArrowWords

15 years 11 months ago

Toronto 1

Thank you. I haven't been sure about this poem and have been revising it. Your comment makes me think that it might be best to leave well enough alone. I am born and raised and grown in Toronto. I sometimes joke that there are so few of us like me now we should form a club. Joking aside I am deeply fond of what the city has become (even for all its faults) and how it has contributed to my own perspectives on life diverse, so different from my WASP background. In this poem I wanted to delve a bit into the ordinary things about growing up and how the city's growth intertwined with my own. I chose the title somewhat by default because I hope to explore aspects of the city and my relationship to it in some other poems, hence "Toronto 1" hopefully being the first of a series. The only thing that worries me about this is that poetry does not come to me like a project. It just sort of happens, I hope however that by logging this idea of looking at the city from different vantage points will lock itself somewhere in my mind and the rest will happen. Best regards, Don