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He entreated with a small soft voice barely perceived in the quiet empty void
of mournful devastation.
Hovering, hidden he manipulated every disbelieving crack
to demonstrate tiny miracles
and whisper cryptic words of kaleidoscoped wisdom afire with
the pungent knowledge of continuation.
He walked with me through the relentless seeking of the malnourished
steering my footsteps
from high windy cliffs of weeping worlds and words of despair
to the sights and sense of manifest’s gifts
interlocking with evermore
in the eternal now which is all that there isn’t and is.
He stayed until he thought I’d stopped missing him, until it seemed I was ready
to not notice him leave.
But when I look back I remember a moment when
my heart felt a fluttering hiccup heave
of which I took such little regard
being busy smelling a rose at the time.
Critiques
xena465
16 years ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks rosina for the visit
shirley harrison
16 years ago
So peacefull!
judyanne
16 years ago
that you read it and enjoy shirley harrison
yenti
16 years ago
Not Sure
judyanne
16 years ago
i am so glad to read your comment ian
Seren
16 years ago
Dearest Judd
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks jc
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years ago
thank you cat
loved
16 years ago
thou silencest me
judyanne
16 years ago
hi loved
greeneyes
16 years ago
Beautiful, I dont know what
judyanne
16 years ago
thank you so very much elizabeth
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