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Jun 30, 2010
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Whim vs Will
whim is a dog!
like any well trained heel
just mention his name
he's at your side
...and dancy
ready to perform
any, and all
his few simple tricks
of your fancy
WILL!
Wow!
now, that's another story!
she's the "Cat"
independent
elusive
finicky
and exclusive
slinking in
for a bit or two
she retains the reins
and epilogue to
its her way
and always her way
and most certainly not
...the way of the dog
like any well trained heel
just mention his name
he's at your side
...and dancy
ready to perform
any, and all
his few simple tricks
of your fancy
WILL!
Wow!
now, that's another story!
she's the "Cat"
independent
elusive
finicky
and exclusive
slinking in
for a bit or two
she retains the reins
and epilogue to
its her way
and always her way
and most certainly not
...the way of the dog
— brittle light, Jun 30, 2010
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