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Jun 29, 2010
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SAVANNAH RIVER
I used to run so wild and free
from Blue Ridge mountains to the sea
my ebb and flow were governed not
by any structure man had wrought
Summer time uncovered muds
deposited by past Spring's floods
if you dared to build too close
I'd wash you 'way when waters rose
Current varied, fast or still
determined mostly by my will
and ,of course,by the terrain
or by amount of falling rain
I held 'bout every kind of fish
that could be served up on a dish
from trout up near my mountain source
to flounder at end of my course
Who'd have thought my depth and span
could be contained by works of man?
but now by earth and concrete mass
my final taming's come to pass
Now I only can run wild
with the leave of Adam's child
my rapids which once roared like thunder
now silenced by the lakes they're under
Water calmer than it was before
and I've miles and miles more shore
more people come to visit yearly
an occurance I approve of dearly
And during recent six year drought
when I'd have been almost dried out
engineers maintained my flow
the dams allowed it to be so
Sometimes I miss my wilder life
filled with uncertainty and strife
but like an old man now grown fat
I'm satisfied with where I'm at
from Blue Ridge mountains to the sea
my ebb and flow were governed not
by any structure man had wrought
Summer time uncovered muds
deposited by past Spring's floods
if you dared to build too close
I'd wash you 'way when waters rose
Current varied, fast or still
determined mostly by my will
and ,of course,by the terrain
or by amount of falling rain
I held 'bout every kind of fish
that could be served up on a dish
from trout up near my mountain source
to flounder at end of my course
Who'd have thought my depth and span
could be contained by works of man?
but now by earth and concrete mass
my final taming's come to pass
Now I only can run wild
with the leave of Adam's child
my rapids which once roared like thunder
now silenced by the lakes they're under
Water calmer than it was before
and I've miles and miles more shore
more people come to visit yearly
an occurance I approve of dearly
And during recent six year drought
when I'd have been almost dried out
engineers maintained my flow
the dams allowed it to be so
Sometimes I miss my wilder life
filled with uncertainty and strife
but like an old man now grown fat
I'm satisfied with where I'm at
— scribbler, Jun 29, 2010
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xena465
16 years ago
Dear Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
savannah
judyanne
16 years ago
wonderful scribbble scribbler
scribbler
16 years ago
Hmmm....
scribbler
16 years ago
savannah
Lil Z
16 years ago
I liked this one
scribbler
16 years ago
savannah
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Stan the Man
scribbler
16 years ago
river
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
river
poewriter58
16 years ago
Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
change
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Scribbler
scribbler
16 years ago
style
mand
16 years ago
One thing that will never
scribbler
16 years ago
fat
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