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From Detroit with Thoughts of You

Michigan night stays light after dark twist off the Fish Eye springing air with a fizz when things fall apart they unravel at both ends just like childhood ribbons still boxed fringed like emotions when things falls apart they become apparent harder to hide was I could I be no you are still so very new to me I to you bemuse master mind to thought I manifest confess being ambushed though I protest I'm taking a whipping whipped whopped soft voice during sleep a tattered heart exposed on sheets pressing limbic system I quit resisting would you allow love kiss love be love make love or canyon along beast of burden need not be did you revisit my dream sinsemilla disseminate messages offered listened to Arias by Donizetti thus you already know pray tell the answer muse © 2010 Lepadah
— Lepadah, Jun 29, 2010

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Country/Region: New York

Favorite Poets: Rumi, Gil Scott Heron, Felipe Luciano, Walt Whitman, Ginsberg, Kerouac, Neruda, Walker, Troupe, James Baldwin etc . . .list endless

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Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

What poetry!!! Sheer

What poetry!!! Sheer magic! ~A The whole modern world has divided itself into Conservatives and Progressives. The business of Progressives is to go on making mistakes. The business of the Conservatives is to prevent the mistakes from being corrected. G.K. Chesteron
Lepadah

Lepadah

15 years 11 months ago

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I really appreciate the read and your kind words. Peace 1 lepadah