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Jun 29, 2010
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From Detroit with Thoughts of You
Michigan night
stays light after dark
twist off the Fish Eye
springing air with a fizz
when things fall apart
they unravel at both ends
just like childhood ribbons
still boxed
fringed like emotions
when things falls apart
they become apparent
harder to hide
was I
could I be
no you are still so very new to me
I to you
bemuse
master mind to thought
I manifest
confess being ambushed
though I protest
I'm taking a whipping
whipped
whopped
soft voice during sleep
a tattered heart exposed on sheets
pressing limbic system
I quit resisting
would you allow love
kiss love
be love
make love
or canyon along
beast of burden need not be
did you revisit my dream sinsemilla
disseminate messages offered
listened to Arias by Donizetti
thus you already know
pray tell the answer
muse
© 2010 Lepadah
— Lepadah, Jun 29, 2010
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Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
What poetry!!! Sheer
Lepadah
15 years 11 months ago
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