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Kailashana
Kailashana
Jun 29, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

good morning earth rise

my cup runneth over with
ten thousand galaxies
the field is plowed
with sky
and the ocean remembers
every returning wave,

good morning
my Beloved
earth rise....



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zSgiXGELjbc


— Kailashana, Jun 29, 2010
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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years ago

ho u,.osre noting me.

ther are antyone things in the wird that enkightment cherrs Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,
Beauregard

Beauregard

16 years ago

Jess I think it's time you go to bed or take a break

You aren't making any sense. Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allan Poe "If technique is of no interest to a writer, I doubt that the writer is an artist." -Marianne Moore
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years ago

too right.

oops, brain fart, sorry, anna Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Dear Anna

Your sweet soul shows how open you are to this kind of experience and your eyes see everything in this poem. Always, Cat
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Lonnie

16 years ago

Simply superb writing!

Anna, I swear you could make an illiterate Ass applaud your poetry! You have that rare gift that seems to make everything you pen come vibrantly alive when read, and this wonderful offering is no exception!
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear M~

I bow gorgeous poem love and hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

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