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EARTH BOUND

EARTH BOUND Before the first day, it is said,There was a misty firmamentMan enwrapped, not in time,But in the spheres of endless beginningDarkness, everywhere for the eyes that saw This beginning, though not of beingWhen man was buried in the abyssDeep down, not in a hollow, pit or tombBut in the ocean waters of the wombHe bade the earth, a peaceful parting Then light came, not from darknessBidding farewell to the nightWith light of knowledge and of the sunHe awoke to a glorious dawnEnjoyed the earth and lived therein His eyes grew dull and could hardly seeThe beauty of the world, but a shadow nowBones became cranky and dry, they saunteredThe soul took a bow from the spirit bodyMother earth swallowed him with ease    
— t. reflexion, Jun 29, 2010

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

15 years 11 months ago

Dear T...

I just want to say how much your poem has touched me... And how beautiful it is. That's all I want to say; I hope its OK... These two lines are so exquisite, and they stay with me: "The soul took a bow from the spirit body Mother earth swallowed him with ease" Gentle regards, Raven-Shakti
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

15 years 11 months ago

Reven-Shakti, Dear

It is the gentle way you present your comment that endears me to you. I appreciate it. Your interest in my scribbles makes me to see you as a friend and the reward of stars to what I sometime consider not too great a poem, shows your generous heart. The fact that we are so tied to the Earth made me to wrtie this piece. Thank you and best wishes. T.