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faithmairee
faithmairee
Jun 28, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

wanton women

wanton women
with wicked ways
want what weary women
wish wouldn't wander
while wed
wondering what webs
weaving wanderers weave
while wooing
wicked wanton women
— faithmairee, Jun 28, 2010

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Region, Country: Florida, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Lawrence Ferlinghetti, Edna St. Vincent Millay, Lucille Clifton and Elizabeth Bishop

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magics02

16 years ago

I like that

The wonton soup you forgot. lol Really tantalizing like try saying it out loud a couple times. I may try this one someday too. Pretty good experiment Faith!! Love at ya Fla gal Mona
faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

You Are Sweet

So I made you smile with this one I see. Well, I'm glad you didn't overlook the line about it being experimental. It was actually easier than I thought although I started out without a clue as to what I might end up with. I have practiced reading this one out loud many times..lol. Thanks for stopping to read it and as always for your lovely comments. Love back atcha, gal-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

It Really Is Fun

You done fabulous You go, Gal! I love it! Sweet Dreams, Friend! ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thank You

Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I'm glad you enjoyed it! ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
yenti

yenti

16 years ago

Faith

I just want to see when you get to the next letter in the alphabet, A good fun thing to make and write up, Well done, Yours Ian.T
faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

Thank You Yenti

It really was a fun experiment. Thanks for reading and responding. Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
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scribbler

16 years ago

wanton

REALLY liked it!! If it helps: many mean married men meander making mothers mournful.Maybe much more moralizing may make more men misunderstanding matriarchs minimally. Turally thang tungled.......scribbler
faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

Oh My Gawd!

That's awesome. I love it! Glad you like mine. Thanks for stopping by. Honestly, Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

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