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paul
paul
Jun 28, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Finally Home

 Her weary heartThrows flares Into the night skyHoping to be rescued  In her hides a secret That brings tears to eyesBeautiful angel with A smile that eases A troubled man’s mind  Every night she recited prayers The type that make heavenly angelsBeg the lord to give her peace  She was a diamond in the sand A queen that needs no throne A saint amongst sinners  In her worst of days She has a faith  That moves mountains  Life had her on a course with no return policy Death was inevitable Still she smiled Even as she breathedHer last breath From above She smiles knowing That she is finally home 
— paul, Jun 28, 2010

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faithmairee

faithmairee

16 years ago

Paul, This Is Beautiful

This poem has depth and is very beautifully written. I especially like the last line. Great poem, Paul. ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
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magics02

16 years ago

Wow

Spellbound and surreal. This one spoke to me and I so enjoyed this write of yours and want to tell you so. This part really stuck out for me. Life had her on a course with no return policy Death was inevitable Still she smiled Even as she breathed Her last breath Really a good write here Paul. Kudos to you guy Mona
Esker

Esker

16 years ago

Like the entire poem

its different this one Mature and yet reserved in its grace of sharing something more a handling of spacing and wording very impresssive Paul!
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raj

16 years ago

Hello Paul

this poem of yours has such a solemn grace which is palpable in your write...this is a wonderful way of paying tribute to a loved one whose soul now rests in eternal peace because of her good deeds in life... warmly..raj (sublime_ocean)...
Apostolos "Paul" Anagnostopoulos

Apostolos "Pau…

16 years ago

Sir

you connected to my poem and for that I must admit that I am proud
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scribbler

16 years ago

I

I can't see one letter of it I don't like.Even line length and verse length add to appeal.Damn good even for a yankee LOL.Got my nom.......scribbler
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

this is very beautiful

it reads so gently, yet so powerfully esker used the word 'mature' which is a word i usually avoid as it more often sounds supercillious - but it fits here - the language cannot be faulted. got my vote too love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Dear Paul

I agree with Mona, right down to her favorite lines. Exquisite. Always, Cat
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poewriter58

16 years ago

Paul

I haven't shed enough tears over all that is happening in my life right now , you want more? Thiss poem is BEAUTIFUL a bit different for you but it works Chrys
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TaylorMishel

16 years ago

I really like this one. it

I really like this one. it is different and amazingly written. :) thank you!
Rett

Rett

16 years ago

Well done Paul

I have watched you go from afair to good poet to a damn fine one in a short time. This one is amazing. Well done sir. Well done indeed. Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin
Apostolos "Paul" Anagnostopoulos

Apostolos "Pau…

16 years ago

Yes Sir

I can see how I became a better writer with the help of this community. Its is an honor to be behind the scenes of such a site
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Paul

I think of all your poetry this one has a different feel ... I really thought you did a great job and mature isnt a word I use either but Esker/steven nailed it sorry to get here late but I got here eventually 11 hours later lol smile wonderful poem bravo love and hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
Mark

Mark

16 years ago

Paul I relate this to how I feel

how I feel to my young friends that left way before their time.. Thanks, Mark people who hate attract people who hate and in the end they all end up hating each other
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ayecp33

16 years ago

Beautiful

Just beautiful. This is such a lovely poem.
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shane

16 years ago

Absolutely Beautiful!

Absolutely beautiful! I love it! Great write! I had a family member who was very sick for 5 yrs before passing away. This reminded me so much of her. Thank you for sharing.
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

Truly a beautiful poem!

Dear Paul, "wonderful" the great journey home, just stunning i would have liked to choose a favourite bit however every last word and the way you used them is perfect! shirley harrison

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