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Jun 28, 2010
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Metro Sexuality
I watch primping in the mirror
moisturizing you're smooth skin
and plucking stray eye brows
You think your prettier than me
You visit the spa
and wear a face pack
don't let it crack
You're good enough to eat
You could be a hand model
if you so choose
you've never done a scrap of hard labour
Bet you kiss your reflection
in each puddle that you pass
and dye your greying hair
I suppose that you wear manscara ?
Do you know that you're a man ?
if you didn't have male genitalia
i'd really have to guess
— lou, Jun 28, 2010
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hobo
16 years ago
lol
lou
16 years ago
Randy
U K Atiyodi
16 years ago
Metro Sexuality
lou
16 years ago
Hi
temidayo
16 years ago
cool work vivid
lou
16 years ago
Hi
Geezer
16 years ago
I got your...
lou
16 years ago
Gee
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Lou
scribbler
16 years ago
metro
lou
16 years ago
Scribbler
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Nice one Lou
lou
16 years ago
shirley
xena465
16 years ago
Late for the party Lou sorry
loved
16 years ago
is it a reference
lou
16 years ago
Loved
loved
16 years ago
i know i know
lou
16 years ago
Not an ass
DawningDaytripper
16 years ago
Not an easy subject to
lou
16 years ago
DD
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