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loved
loved
Jun 28, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

humanSexuality a modern version

sexuality...
is just a matter of convenience

 if you don't want a kid
go homo /lesbian

and
when u need a progeny   
go  straight
for the opposite sex

but
when you are fed up
go solo
— loved, Jun 28, 2010

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Damo

16 years ago

Simplistic but...

A 'modern' take... boxed up neatly... if only it were this easy...on second thought thank 'Time' it's not!
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

L:O:L

Straight to the point! ah Loved, this is very clever and if i may say witty! the title is gr88888888 with much love shirley harrison
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magics02

16 years ago

Okay you want raw truth here Istan

This is my raw truth You use the word YOU and then U so why not keep it consistent throughout your write? Your format is a little uneven and I am not sure if this is a poem or prose. It sounds like a mere statement to me. See if you want to work on it some and let me know. If not that is fine also Mona xoxo

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