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S o r r y S t a t i o n s


jacket crumples like a sigh
leather whisper
hard chrome buckles
you lean out of your shoes
one turned on its side
and the dirty worry of the floor
smiles with tobacoo breadth

these island hearts we salvaged
the hot light weeping through
the storm salvation
lashing us in bitter rains
with knuckle hold on brackish
iron signature

stand in the double light
not turned not facing
I remember the lace
that shoulder length
supine sway your
laughter met

the chandelier delighted
your cupped wishs
tickling the stern admonishment
this room needs painting
exhausted with weary
fret

here is where our fingerprints met
that snowstorm havoc
the Doppler girls plan

we doubled under our ballast
like diving dreamers
excursions in dark deep love

stretch in that perfect light
the doorframe arch
your calves splendid

all the pretty notions
stifled like stippled
emotions

swirling in that tenderest
heartache and leaping
eager like lions
in the minute glances
of touch

— Esker, Jun 28, 2010

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Esker

Esker

15 years 11 months ago

12:23/12:25 a.m.

Restlesslittlesoul Posted VIOLIN at 12:23 and it has Chandaliers in it I posted SORRY STATIONS at 12:25 at this late of time Its much possible I scanned through picked up that word and included this in my work I have had this occur before and present the link if such is the case then this is My take on word and theme But I do like her poem very much! Esker
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Restlesslittlesoul

15 years 11 months ago

This is POETRY!

Steven, there is absolutely no need for an explanation. It´s not like you stole my idea or something even close to that. "chandelier" is just a word! As for your poetry: sublime, as always. "we doubled under our ballast like diving dreamers excursions in dark deep love" Oh it is piercing! As far as I am concerned, this is what poetry is all about! http://restlesslittlesoul.webs.com
Esker

Esker

15 years 11 months ago

bounce ideas

Im thinking poetry even more been years since I hung out with an artist and now since your dynamic writing has gotten my interest I am thinking in Poetic thought I greatly like your directness and will be trying to create on a slowly elaborate level I like how the two poems came out