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Jun 27, 2010
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ah, ya got me!
another hack with proof
i’ve written my own down-fall
an extensive paper trail to
my room
my desk
my keyboard
a collage of pointing fingers
i can hear a cutting reply
a-beeping off the screen
nibbles of laughter
beyond reading what
isn’t even there yet
my reflection and echo
are off- reacting slow
from 'cracks and dictums
disgusted, burnt and livid
like two geriatrics
strapped tight into
one callous
glass deception
snuffling blameries
back to back
speaking among those
who have already
forgotten me-
do please
choke on my words
and less on your own
i’ve written my own down-fall
an extensive paper trail to
my room
my desk
my keyboard
a collage of pointing fingers
i can hear a cutting reply
a-beeping off the screen
nibbles of laughter
beyond reading what
isn’t even there yet
my reflection and echo
are off- reacting slow
from 'cracks and dictums
disgusted, burnt and livid
like two geriatrics
strapped tight into
one callous
glass deception
snuffling blameries
back to back
speaking among those
who have already
forgotten me-
do please
choke on my words
and less on your own
— the_fool, Jun 27, 2010
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Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Hello