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Jun 27, 2010
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Dreaming of Spring
From the peaks of the lofty mountains
to the plains around its foot hills
you made me soar like an eagle
before alighting on grassy fields
you gave me the wings
to explore the beautiful sights
leaving me breathless
in an orgasmic delight
The waning moon now glides
across those lofty peaks
waving before she dips
wearing her crescent smile
foothills now shorn of grass
once tall in winter greens
its blades are now drooping
dreaming of Spring...
raj (sublime_ocean)...
to the plains around its foot hills
you made me soar like an eagle
before alighting on grassy fields
you gave me the wings
to explore the beautiful sights
leaving me breathless
in an orgasmic delight
The waning moon now glides
across those lofty peaks
waving before she dips
wearing her crescent smile
foothills now shorn of grass
once tall in winter greens
its blades are now drooping
dreaming of Spring...
raj (sublime_ocean)...
— raj, Jun 27, 2010
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Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Raj
raj
16 years ago
Dear Cat
xena465
16 years ago
Spring
raj
16 years ago
Hello Xena
faithmairee
16 years ago
Very Lovely
raj
16 years ago
Hello Faith
mona
16 years ago
What a lovely words
raj
16 years ago
thank you Mona for your
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Raj
raj
16 years ago
Dear JayCee
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
I second Jayne's comment
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