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THE MYSTERY WOMAN

THE MYSTERY WOMAN There was a mermaid named EcilaThat lived in the Creek RiverDeep down in the dark, under a rockWhere the current coursed slowlyIn contrast, the surface, fast flowingWhere we swam in mid SaturdaysHer house, said to be more beautifulThan what we will ever live to seeShe would come out in her seasonsTo take a cohort amongst our men The strange behaviour of men, explainedOf those who came in contact with herThey won’t touch their wives for her sakeSome became slaves to her luring spellsAnd sacrificed their own manhoodFor material riches and special giftsBizarre, the ways of the water spiritsSometime transformed into real humansAnd find their ways to live in our homesOr in the streets when you take a wrong turn     
— t. reflexion, Jun 27, 2010

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

15 years 11 months ago

Water Spirits...

Bizarre the ways of men... who are ripe to be lured by the Water Spirits... They keep making that turn, even when they know it's wrong. I like your Mystery Woman poem very much, T. Gentle regards, Raven-Shakti To see the madness and yet walk a perfect silver line. -Ben Okri
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

15 years 11 months ago

...and of mystery men

The mystery woman has ruined a lot of homes and the men who fall prey are also guilty. For the comments and your time, thank you. Best wishes. T.