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WHERE PETALS FLOAT
WHERE PETALS FLOAT Ann June 27th 2010.
Where roses float their petals on the stream,
their notes of pink and yellow,
their mellow thoughts so softly
ride the sheen of water flowing,
over weir and waterfall;
so gently speaks the nymph of nature's breath,
not even death can steal the fire,
from her strange and beautiful life
of dramas both good and bad, to us;
we dream, and send our messages of love
on streams like this, written as memories
of summer's simple warmth and bloom,
when blushed with colour we too have our hour;
to sail along, its meadows either side
where flowers grow and hide the less attractive
sides of vistas, where the dew knows knots
and fancied pains, the loam dark black;
the roots of trees like snakes,
roam corridors unseen, deep deep deep down,
the whole achieved before sundown, and back
to normal what is that, don't ask,
its where and when and if we are, just that.
Critiques
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
And my breath falls on a
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Ann, how are you?
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
I am fine thank you Xena.
mand
15 years 11 months ago
I hope and pray all goes well with you Ann
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
So beautiful! I really loved
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you my sweet Elizabeth