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Jun 26, 2010
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Street Scene
Street Scene
An old man wrapped in ragged clothes
pissing on a wall
legs so frail and spindly
he looks like he will fall
Grime faced children looking on
giggle in delight
as if they have no cares at all
of where they'll spend this night
Smells of puke and reefer smoke
linger in the air
whores perform their oral tasks
as though no folk were there
Just ahead, a young man lies,
bleeding in the street
stabbed for seven dollars
and the shoes upon his feet
Not a soul will stop to help
not one person cares
just another day of pain
devoid of hope or prayers
C. Lon R. Bruso
An old man wrapped in ragged clothes
pissing on a wall
legs so frail and spindly
he looks like he will fall
Grime faced children looking on
giggle in delight
as if they have no cares at all
of where they'll spend this night
Smells of puke and reefer smoke
linger in the air
whores perform their oral tasks
as though no folk were there
Just ahead, a young man lies,
bleeding in the street
stabbed for seven dollars
and the shoes upon his feet
Not a soul will stop to help
not one person cares
just another day of pain
devoid of hope or prayers
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Jun 26, 2010
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Critiques
Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Cat!
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
Wow Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Mona!
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
heartfelt write lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Judy!
Professor Purple
15 years 11 months ago
Beautiful!
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Antoine!
Rett
15 years 11 months ago
Awesome Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Rett!
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
A genius of poetry!
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Lil Z!
poewriter58
15 years 11 months ago
Lon
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Dear!
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
scenes
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Scribbler!
Roscoe Lane
15 years 11 months ago
You have,
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Roscoe!
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Shirley!
raj
15 years 11 months ago
Mr.Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, raj!
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
Beautifully written! Brought
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Elizabeth!
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, JayCee!
eleahj
15 years 11 months ago
This poem was amazing and
seabhac
15 years 11 months ago
Excellent
lou
15 years 11 months ago
Lonnie
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks, lou!
Mari Shine
15 years 11 months ago
Lonnie, what a finely
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you, mari !