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Jun 26, 2010
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Street Scene
Street Scene
An old man wrapped in ragged clothes
pissing on a wall
legs so frail and spindly
he looks like he will fall
Grime faced children looking on
giggle in delight
as if they have no cares at all
of where they'll spend this night
Smells of puke and reefer smoke
linger in the air
whores perform their oral tasks
as though no folk were there
Just ahead, a young man lies,
bleeding in the street
stabbed for seven dollars
and the shoes upon his feet
Not a soul will stop to help
not one person cares
just another day of pain
devoid of hope or prayers
C. Lon R. Bruso
An old man wrapped in ragged clothes
pissing on a wall
legs so frail and spindly
he looks like he will fall
Grime faced children looking on
giggle in delight
as if they have no cares at all
of where they'll spend this night
Smells of puke and reefer smoke
linger in the air
whores perform their oral tasks
as though no folk were there
Just ahead, a young man lies,
bleeding in the street
stabbed for seven dollars
and the shoes upon his feet
Not a soul will stop to help
not one person cares
just another day of pain
devoid of hope or prayers
C. Lon R. Bruso
— Lonnie, Jun 26, 2010
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Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Cat!
magics02
16 years ago
Wow Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Mona!
judyanne
16 years ago
heartfelt write lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Judy!
Professor Purple
16 years ago
Beautiful!
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Antoine!
Rett
16 years ago
Awesome Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Rett!
Lil Z
16 years ago
A genius of poetry!
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Lil Z!
poewriter58
16 years ago
Lon
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Dear!
scribbler
16 years ago
scenes
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, Scribbler!
Roscoe Lane
16 years ago
You have,
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Roscoe!
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Shirley!
raj
16 years ago
Mr.Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, raj!
greeneyes
16 years ago
Beautifully written! Brought
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, Elizabeth!
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, JayCee!
eleahj
16 years ago
This poem was amazing and
seabhac
16 years ago
Excellent
lou
16 years ago
Lonnie
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thanks, lou!
Mari Shine
16 years ago
Lonnie, what a finely
Lonnie
16 years ago
Thank you, mari !
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