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Upon my bed

The sheets were white- white linen,

But Dirt comes where he is bidden.

Joints are weak, whine on and on;

Strong winds could break it anon.

But I’ve made my bed.



It’s damp- damp where I wet it;

And sure not of the best fit:

Holes have eaten the cover

And left little to savour.

But I’ve made my bed.


There are spots- crimson spots

Which form a pattern of sorts.

There are roses, some fresh,

Whose hooked thorns feed on my flesh.

But I’ve made my bed.



I have made my bed.

I will lie IN it.



I- alone!


— slybard, Jun 26, 2010

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Region, Country: Kampala, Uganda, UGA

Favorite Poets: Jonathan Swift, Sarah Kay, William Shakespeare, Elizabeth Browning, Christina Rossetti, Grace Nichols, The Lantern Meet of Poets (the biggest and oldest society of poets in Uganda)

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Beauregard

Beauregard

15 years 11 months ago

Love the imagery and repetition

My favorite line: "Whose hooked thorns feed on my flesh". Enjoyed this tale you've weaved, Josh. Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allan Poe "If technique is of no interest to a writer, I doubt that the writer is an artist." -Marianne Moore