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Jun 26, 2010
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Upon my bed
The sheets were white- white linen,
But Dirt comes where he is bidden.
Joints are weak, whine on and on;
Strong winds could break it anon.
But I’ve made my bed.
It’s damp- damp where I wet it;
And sure not of the best fit:
Holes have eaten the cover
And left little to savour.
But I’ve made my bed.
There are spots- crimson spots
Which form a pattern of sorts.
There are roses, some fresh,
Whose hooked thorns feed on my flesh.
But I’ve made my bed.
I have made my bed.
I will lie IN it.
I- alone!
— slybard, Jun 26, 2010
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Critiques
Beauregard
15 years 11 months ago
Love the imagery and repetition
slybard
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks