Life Sucks Then You Die

I have found every time things are going to good get ready something is about to happen. nice write *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*

Cuts you down Smacks you down Knocks a person sideways Builds you up the very next day then turns around again just so it can hurt you Wow Lou ,I'm just recovering from this. you know , WHEN I saw this poem I felt its just written for me. Well done Great work You really can touch peoples' feeling through your words. I loved every word in it. MONA

I like it also and agree with its meanings Love at ya gal Mona (now we got two Mona's here LOL) Magics02 x0x00x0x

Shucks I feel bad about what happened between us, but we've sorted it; I hope. Life does suck sometimes and with much effort, we have to pull ourselves back from the brink. I can’t see anything wrong except that I’m not sure if you meant your lines to differ from single and double spacing. I know that happens sometimes when I upload a poem. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

strong poem i could feel misery! brilliant write. i would love to co-write something with you one day! if you would have me!!! L:O:L much love shirley harrison

And so true. The title hooked me right away, and I stayed hooked til then end. Personnally I find it dark, not really humourous, maybe that's just me. Antoine

it very much, but I too thought that it was too dark to be humorous. I also didn't care for the two downs, one right after another. I would have said: Cuts you down, smacks you around, or some such. Other than that, I think it was a really good expression of how you are feeling. ~ xx ~ Gee

If not for the canyons,would peaks be the same? very enjoyable......scribbler

there is a classic line from Red Dwarf that mighht apply here "Life is like a joss stick, it stinks and then its over"... john

now i have been thinking that your title "lifes a bitch and then you die" it is just so apt for your poem and really strong, but hey take it or leave it L:O:L hey i found live chat today by accident i made seren laugh! we should go on together soon? ok bye honey much love shirl....... shirley harrison

ps,what about "female dog and then you die"? L:O:L ok just to say have you read my poem Fred and Ginger??????? LMAO! catch up next week when the ball and chains at work! shirley harrison