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DREAM BUILDER Edited

The hammer falls, the nail goes in
  this is how his days begin
   the hammer ,saw ,level and rules
   just partial listing of his tools

He started building in his youth
   25 years past, to tell the truth
   by now his reputation's grown
   strength of his structures widely known

Employers know that there's no need
   to check his work, its now agreed
   by all that he will never shirk
   and takes great pride in all his work

Unlike most he gladly shares
   knowledge with any  youth who cares
   others sadly think that giving
  might interfere with making  living

Translating blueprints? what a cinch
   he reads them down to every inch
   he's actually drawn up quite a few
   just one of the things  he can do

He oft' requested to point out
   changes that might bring about
   a feeling of much larger spaces
   by moving walls other places

 He works out in the  cold and heat
   he still thinks his job is neat
    he loves to watch each project grow
   resulting from all he does know

Drive around his town you'll see
   homes on every property
   so many built by his own sweat
   wiped from his furrowed brow, and yet

If his house you chance to see
   all understated modesty
   his labor's love it always seems
   is spent on building others' dreams
  
— scribbler, Jun 25, 2010

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

interesting scribble scribbler

a few apostrophes missing is all by now his reputations grown - (reputation's) to check behind him, its agreed - (it's) and takes great pride in each days work - (day's) Unlike most hes glad to share - (he's) in fact, hes drawn up quite a few - (he's) so true of some of us - building others' dreams - great finish love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

apostrophes

Apostrophes ! when I use them they're not needed,when I don't they are.Must be my Achilles heel lol!thanks for correction and kind words......scribbler
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

"Dream Builder"

Hi Stan ,my friend is over from England so i havent been on much, I must just say Wonderful poem, i need a dream builder to build my Villa L:O:L when i'm rich!!!!!!!!! Much love and i will be back in a few days excellent poetry as always shirley harrison
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

builder

thanks for time and have fun!....Stan
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

I love it Stan

A builder doesn't get the respect and appreciation that he should get with all the sweat and hard work that goes into building a house. When I was reading this I noticed the same as Judy, some words need apostrophes. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

APOSTROPHES

are going to be the death of me ha!ha!Thanks for taking time to read and comment....Stan
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

I know Stan

It’s a pain in the butt, I have to check and double check sometimes on my poems to see if I've got them right. One example I can give here is... Unlike most {hes} glad to share ..... with hes it becomes just hes, one word; but in reality in full... it's [he is] so it needs the apostrophe to indicate it's two words, not one. PS. Now I need brain surgery after exerting it too much ha, ha. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Stan

I see the beautiful ladies of Neopoet are already assisting you but I loved this one too lol nice work hun love and hugs JayCee (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

builder

Both the women and men are keeping me on my toes.Almost a waste of time to preview before submission 'cause ya'll don't miss a thing LOL.Wish spell check would stop telling me "ya'll"is incorrect.thanks and see you on the stream......Stan
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raj

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Stan

this Nom and these stars are for you and also for that Craftsman whose work you have brought out so well in the Spotlight...a good reminder for us all to be grateful for those who build our homes and shelters in which we reside...bringing into focus their tireless efforts ... i would have loved to meet the one who inspired this write..but since i can't..please give him a Hats off from me when you happen to meet him... thank you for this lovely reminder of those who work ceaseless for us..as you have done through these verses.. warmly...raj (sublime_ocean)
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

builder

Why thank you so much raj.And by the way you have conversed with subject(me)before........scribbler
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Stan

Just a couple of suggestions: Unlike most hes gladly shares (he) resulting from all he does know know (an extra Know) You have great storytelling skills. every time I come to your page I am in awe of your talent. My favorite: He started building in his youth 25 years past, to tell the truth by now his reputation’s grown strength of his structures widely known Always, Cat
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

builder

Thanks for spotting errors which I just corrected.I appreciate your kind words and taking time to read and comment..........scribbler
Geezer

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

Building a poem is...

a little different than building house. With a poem, you can just erase what you have written, and do it again. Not so easy with a house. We all have our Achilles' heel. I think I have a couple of them, LOL Great work, and sentiment. ~ Gee