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brittle light

Jun 25, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Fleeting

                "Fleeting"
                    Haiku

      snowflakes in sunshine
swift comes the dark of despair
         the shape of water

— brittle light, Jun 25, 2010

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Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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15 years 11 months ago

fleeting

Mind not in proper order to make any critique,just thought to let you know I dropped by.......scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

thanks for dropping by

I don't believe we have formally met (neopoet style). My name is Al, and it appears that we are about the same age...some day I may post a photo of my mug...not that age should determine everything...but it is nice at times to have cultural references in common. I don't know much yet about Haiku or any other Japanese poetry. I noticed your post of one, maybe we can help each other in figuring out what they are about. in the meantime, keep on keepin' on....etc. AL