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Jun 25, 2010
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Diseased Eyes
Have you ever met someone
who's smile was fixed,
does it puzzle you
when transparency appears
...with obtrusive lucidity
you're not waiting to see,
like the smiling lion's hungry gaze
with her focus way too clear.
Deceptively active,
they have their clothes on straight,
with the deep need for the advantage
imprinted on their faces.
Clarity,
are you afflicted,
reading those hidden corners,
revealing mind shadowed mirrors,
hearing what is never quite said,
seeing where cutting glances go...
sometimes, I'm so alone.
who's smile was fixed,
does it puzzle you
when transparency appears
...with obtrusive lucidity
you're not waiting to see,
like the smiling lion's hungry gaze
with her focus way too clear.
Deceptively active,
they have their clothes on straight,
with the deep need for the advantage
imprinted on their faces.
Clarity,
are you afflicted,
reading those hidden corners,
revealing mind shadowed mirrors,
hearing what is never quite said,
seeing where cutting glances go...
sometimes, I'm so alone.
— themoonman, Jun 25, 2010
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raskin
15 years 11 months ago
I hear you on this one. I
themoonman
15 years 11 months ago
Hi Raskin...
Ravenshakti
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Richard...
themoonman
15 years 11 months ago
the emptiness...
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
hey fellow sandlapper
themoonman
15 years 11 months ago
It does...
faithmairee
15 years 11 months ago
Great Poem
themoonman
15 years 11 months ago
Hi Faith...
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
I connected to just those words here
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Richard
Phx4ever
15 years 10 months ago
this poem