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loved
loved
Jun 24, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The ultimate in poetry

 
The ultimate in poetry
Write anymore poetry,converse with either he or she,then you shall have to divorce me...I  hate your talkingacross my back and if you continue you I shall have to sack
and
so I must surrender my desireto compose any more for my spouse aloneis my life ah yes, entire 
Albeit there's nothing else I'm able to do,but for my spouse this much I'm obliged to... So wait you may not Henceforth hear from me till I'm  ultimately burried under the palm grove tree.  
— loved, Jun 24, 2010

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lou

lou

15 years 11 months ago

Loved

your poetry is like improvised jazz, brilliant and hard to define. love lou xx
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

thank u

.i have trained u to give fivers or nil thanks zazzy yes one that's uuuuuuuuu
MM

Moloko D. Mahuma

15 years 11 months ago

Great poem

Great poem, I must say. Moloko
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

thank u friend

. u say gr88888888 and hate to give fiver straight then there must be some deficiency please do rightfully freely rawfully..........state
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Brilliant

This is really great. Love how it flows, your choice of words and how your delivery was right on target. Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

ur

..a brilliant friend who can evaluate essence glad we met some day i may come to Florida and on the beach dance toooo ........... as i can't swim will that do?